Reviews for Under Pressure
AshJaz chapter 17 . 11/24/2020
I always find it weird that people make Sirius and Remus gay. Remus married a woman and had a baby with her. Also, interesting choice not having Regulus die. In the books he would have already been dead at this point.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/24/2020
Sorry to say but the chapter has uploaded as gobbledegook! Really good story so far x
AshJaz chapter 15 . 11/17/2020
So they just aren't going to mention that Peter is an animagus so he can be caught?
Sakura Lisel chapter 7 . 11/17/2020
Lily should have REMINDED Moody that she’s been in the HOSPITAL in a COMA for a MONTH or so. So unless he thinks she was hit with confundus and imperious spells in the HOURS since she’s woke up just that day, remind him how stupid his confundus and imperious accusations on, because IF she was under the spells back before she was in a coma, wouldn’t the HOSPITAL with their millions of magical medical scans or whatever have DETECTED signs of the spells on her AND James, probably starting from Day 1 of the two of them being admitted to the hospital up until now, with no reports of the scans coming up positive with either one. Or IF she really was under those spells back when she was put in a coma, wouldn’t the spells have WORN OFF on their own by now in the WEEKS while she was knocked out in a coma? *lol*
Millie072 chapter 8 . 9/5/2020
No humanity at all for wizard prisoners. It would be interesting to know how dementers came to be guards at the prison. How wizards managed to negotiate with the dementers long enough to explain the how, where & why of their duties without the wizards going mad. Having magic sounds marvelous but living in the British wizarding world? Not so much.
trend breaker chapter 7 . 9/1/2020
sadly not much happening
Millie072 chapter 6 . 8/21/2020
Having that kind of mess greeting them after the day they've had. Enough to shatter anyone. Actually it's surprising they could still enter the flat. Why didn't the aurors ward it? Where is Dumbles scheming hand in all this? Did the order know Sirius' address before everything went to hell? He's not surrender Harry's custody without a fight. An physically exhausted mother and a werewolf do not make for good family per the Wizengamot. Has Fumbles found out Lily & James are aware & Lily is on the loose? If he has, James is very vulnerable in the hospital. A werewolf, a muggleborn and James incapacitated, who do you think would win custody in a wizard legal case? Your writing lends itself to marvelous speculation. Thanks
Millie072 chapter 5 . 8/15/2020
Extremely interesting beginning. We all know Sirius suffered in Azkaban, but few seem to portray what he experienced except in a sentence or two. Petunia may have been bitchslapped, but that is very little pnishment. Hopefully when James is up & both have regained their strength, there will be more. It's been 45 months since Halloween, how is Lily managing to run around? Adrenalin only lasts so long.
JohnMonty chapter 5 . 8/15/2020
Good chapter! Damn Lily should've done more than slap that giraffe-necked bitch. Hopefully Lily and James can get Sirius a trial. Wonder what Lily's reaction will be when she finds out it was Dumbledore who left Harry with Petunia to endure a loveless, abusive childhood. Hopefully at the least she will slap the damn lemon drop out of his mouth and break his jawbone. If i was Lily i would get her family, Sirius and Remus and flip Britain and Dumbles the bird. Have them go of to the States to raise and train Harry for Voldy's return and have him attend Ilvermorny. Good chapter, update soon!