Reviews for The Fox and the Rabbit |
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![]() ![]() hope to see more sometime soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story, though I’m surprised now one has called him foxy lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just because it's the logical choice doesn't mean it's the correct choice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If that's the case, then you shouldn't have graduated and become an underground hero with your bias against the students |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one who tried to kill all for one says. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because he, and you're only making it worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aizawa... Aizawa, are you retarded? If you're going to act like that towards Izuku, then you should have been the same with Katsuki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely love it, loved the development of every character, and the slow sweat progress that each chapter brings makes me squeal to read the next chapter love it keep up the great work and take ur time making another great chapter for us readers ;3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to see the dragon lady get some love also, add her in and make it poly. Have the three beasts trying to figure it out together. It even plays into their quirks. With the dragon being about hoarding and the other two just wanting to get breeding with the all three of them. Not to say that it would just be because 'bReDiNN iS BiG kINkY' but rather that their instincts opens the door for them to start and for a loving and wholesome poly relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice to see that you aren't just bashing Bakugo and are giving him a chance at redemption. I'll be honest it kinda seemed like a bias against Bakugo you had as a reader was seeping in as a writer. I'm glad it's not just you bashing him and that he will actually have a chance to turn this around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My problem is that people are getting after Bakugo for all the wrong reasons. This is a cut throat tournament. Besides for lethal force, one should be expecting injury and broken limbs. We have those in football for fuck's sake. Now what happens when you shove 40 teenagers with super powers in a arena and tell them not to hold back. You're tempting fate at that point. You should expect injury at the least and shouldn't be surprised when there's a broken bone. In comparison a scar is the bare fucking minimum when you have someone whose quirk turns them into a walking artillery battery. Not to mention you're going to be dealing with the consequences from having one of your bones broken for the rest of your life. Don't get me wrong I hate early Bakugo but I feel like you are playing up his assholeness a bit too much and are getting after him for the wrong reasons and things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You don't actually explain how ojiro and toru avoided getting frozen. Just that they stayed on their toes. |
![]() ![]() I really hope you come back to writing this story because it is amazing and I hope to see were it leads |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have not checked the updated stories list of mine on here in a while, finding out this updated made by week, great job |