Reviews for The Crimson King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope that this story will get an update soon. Really looking forward to the interactions betweek Hinata and Naruto. Also to see what will happen to Sasuke if he goes and tries to propose his fimiliar “Be honoured you can repopulate my clan” spiel to Krul. Really looking forward to what comes next. |
![]() ![]() Fun story. Though tbh I don't like how Hinata recognizes Kakashi, but can't place where she saw him, (especially considering how she thought about the the person who 'killed' Naruto literally right after thinking Kakashi was familiar). She seems to have been hyper fixated on that moment for several years, and is actively seeking Kakashi, so I highly doubt she wouldnt immediately put two and two together. IMO it probably would have been better if Kakashi was perhaps wearing a hood and she only saw him from the side or behind, heard his voice, and/or recognized the sound and glow from his Raikiri when she inevitably sees it. She wouldn't associate the voice with Kakashi immediately since she likely has only heard his lazy apathetic or 'cheerful' voice, whereas that night it was probably cruel and laced with hatred. Dunno, I just think her not recognizing Kakashi would feel more organic if she had either a) suppressed the memory for being traumatic until perhaps seeing/hearing the Raikiri, b) she hadn't seen noticed his very distinctive hair, or c) she knows why he looks familiar, but is in disbelief that her Sensei would do something like that until she has more to go by than just his familiar hair. Just a bit of food for thought in case you pick up the story again. Take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so keep going my friend merry Christmas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can not wait for more |
![]() ![]() Wish there was more sadly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next, please. It's so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will you continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ever played Castlevania Lords of Shadow? |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. Your one of my fav writers. Hope you can finish this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is getting good. I wonder when Kakashi will meet his end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can more chapters come soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
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