Reviews for Going to Far (Naruto Fanfiction)
Tenjo chapter 1 . 9/7
Okay, so I won’t mention how OOC Tsunade is since it’s kinda the point of the story, but why is everyone else so out of character? Also, here are some pointers. First, don’t use caps lock to show they are shouting; it’s tacky, messy and just plain ridiculous. Second, don’t have the characters act completely bipolar; out of character is one thing, but them not having any actual definable character? Horrible. Third, work on your English; I’m not one to insult others for lacking in a tongue that (assumedly) is not native to them, but if you plan on writing a story in a language then you better actually learn that language properly. The way they speak and the flow of the sentences make it feel like an eight-year-old wrote this, and you repeatedly wrote ‘to’ instead of ‘too’. When you even have an error like that in the title, it’s probably a sign you shouldn’t be writing stories yet.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/5
Um, this is the same as the previous chapter. Did you mean to post something new but reposted this on accident?
weerouverz chapter 5 . 9/5
it's the same chapter lol
shadowbroker13 chapter 3 . 8/20
I would have loved to see jiryia's (sp?) Reaction of what happened to naruto before she apologized
weerouverz chapter 1 . 8/20
ayo nice
deniswanheda chapter 2 . 8/19
Interesante, muy interesante
Sólo , eres fan de titanic
weerouverz chapter 2 . 8/18
wait so its over, or is there gonna be another part?
weerouverz chapter 1 . 8/17
plz continue
Reedz22 chapter 1 . 8/16
that cliffhanger though