Reviews for Those Gentle Souls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This'll never be updated, but I want you to know I enjoyed this fic. You write Bell's character excellently, allowing him to retain his core personality while still implementing implements of Tanjiro's own life into Bell's dreams. Thank you for the good read. Take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one one the best fics I've ever read. A shame that its discontinued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can Ryu make up her mind? - you need to looking for an challenge Cranel - you need to stay safe Cranel - you need to defeat an infant dragon Cranel Einas reaction after the Minotaur incident was a bit too...stiff. Thats right, fuck off Freya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good to see that this time the crazy elf doesn't advise Wallenstein to sexually harass Bell in his sleep. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I hate Ryu but nevermind. But the (...) are pretty anoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I feel like I couldnt caputure her character yet". She has NO character, thats the problem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bell’s compassion feels a little cheap here. I get the metaphor you’re trying for between monsters and demons, but there are too many differences between them for it to be impactful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Binged this all and I wish for some more, this was a fucking masterpiece. I hope it returns someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I was looking everywhere for this fic... sad to know its completely dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the name of god please continue this story it is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing. It's always interesting to see a kind Paragon type character contrasted with a darker setting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lili could learns Water Breathing from Bell, and later learn Flower Breathing. She could learn Insect Breathing too, but to effectively utilize it she would need a specially made sword coated in poison, and knowledge about how to create poisons and how to utilize them in combat to achieve the most deadly effect. |
![]() ![]() Danmachi story idea: Liliruca dies in the dungeon after being used as bait by some adventurers and is reborn in the modern world as Kashiwagi Rein from Darwin’s Game, where she proceeds to live the normal life she always dreamed about, until she’s invited to the Darwin’s Game. Then, after the events of the Darwin’s Game and dying, she finds herself back in the dungeon as Liliruca Arde minutes before her first death. Rein is a skilled sniper and leader (it would be interesting if she got Gaurdian of the World Branch as a skill and sigils became skills too, she could give sigils to her Familia members), and they’re both connected to Irish mythology as Lili is the reincarnation of Fianna and Rein is in possession of the sigil Gae Assail. Also, they both wear coats, though Lili’s clothes are all practically in tatters (the poor girl is in desperate need of new clothes). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m looking forward to when you will update this story, I really hope one day you will continue from where you left off. As for a breathing technique for Lili, how about Flower Breathing? Flower Breathing is a Breathing Style derived from Water Breathing and Lili worked in a flower shop when she run away from Soma Familia to try and live a normal life. |