Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this series, and binge-read the whole thing. I had a great time. But I hadn't realized the final installment was unfinished. I do hope you still plan to finish it, the story is fantastic though very dark. I would really like to read the rest of it. You aren't really going to kill off Harry, are you? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this story hasn't been updated in over 2 years and I'm sad to see it happen... this was one if my favorite stories and now I'll never know how it ends... #haphneforever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ao3 is very difficult to navigate, I would avoid that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why type "shuttered " instead of " shuddered "? This is in each book. |
![]() ![]() Your writing is very exciting, and I sm sooo disappointed that you haven't finished Harry Black. Please finish it MAY 2024 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliat story my friend, looking forward to more of your otstanding authourship, Thanks for a great ride so far, |
![]() ![]() ![]() been binge reading your stories, and i gotta say that even though there have been weird inconsistencies and odd typos, I've been loving the story! I've laughed, cried and a few other emotions in between. wether you end up posting in ff or ao3, you can bet that I'll have it favorited to some back and read over and over again. also, congrats on your mastery! takes a lot of determination to get that, and I'm so happy and proud of you! now... off to read this book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps I am far from the first to express this idea. The first thing that comes to mind as a universal weapon against a super OP vampire boss is the Black ancestral sword, which seems to be anti-magic. All that remains is to find a squib or a muggle swordsman. To be honest, I am very annoyed by the appearance of super vampires with whom it is not clear what to do. There are many of them, they make zombies, they are immoral. Very interesting) Well, maybe the goblins will do something with them, because the wizards in this story are overwhelmingly useless, if we are not talking about the main characters. It’s not even clear how they were able to win all the interspecies wars (well, really, in the entire history of wars, goblins and vampires never thought of uniting? I don’t believe it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() man its always disappointing hitting the current end of a story you've become emotionally invested in. I hope to all that is holy you get around to finishing this! |
![]() ![]() Write more, whine less. It’s a good story, so get on with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read all four in a row over the weekend; wow. I love this! Decisive order, with Sirius and Harry doing what Dumbles should have done from the start. I love pretty much every character, including Ron and Hermione, and Neville, even more than the books. More importantly, I hope you are well. I would prefer the AO3 option, purely because it has night mode, and I prefer a dark background, but I would read this story on any platform - looking forward to your next update x |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's the status of the book? |
![]() ![]() ![]() why not using this account, and upload them as new stories? that way we can read both and have them side by side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My only complaint is how you seem to want people to swim in sweat suddenly. Pouring from people like Waterfalls, nearly creating a river, its a bit much. |