Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to Neville? Hopefully he's not dead?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your writing, truly gifted |
![]() ![]() Great new chapter to the story! I really liked Neville's scenes in this chapter, and I enjoyed how you brought out the lion in this seemingly docile man. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Ooh are they going to amplify each other? |
![]() ![]() ![]() GO NEVILLE! Seriously GREAT chapter m8! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neville is a badass, Nott is well not. No mention of Astoria's beau yet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Astoria is almost definitely going to fix her curse with the Black’s family sword that seems to leech off magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm going to be honest, I've been reading your saga since the start, but I'm terrible about leaving reviews. (I apologize for that and I shall do my best to work on it!) Anyhow, Neville's scene was badass. I'm really not sure what else to say because that's what it was. haha Except if he dies... -.- I dunno if I could handle it, let alone Harry... I really really LOVE Michael and Daphne's relationship. It just amuses me so much because you just see that they care for each other and just won't admit it. The only other platonic ship I may love more than that? Harry/Astoria. Their sibling bond is so precious. And this chapter just tugs on the heartstrings more. You just want that cure for her... :/ Looking forward to what's next. No rush because I remember how those days of tons of assignments were! ~Ace |
![]() ![]() Great work! Please keep going! |
![]() ![]() Ok, ok, I wrote the Ch 6 disappointed review in haste without getting to the end. I just really wanted to see Daphne and harry succeed. I see what you did there with Snape, and it was good. I take back my disappointed review! I've learned my lesson to wait until the end! You're story has been very entertaining and great to read. keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() Chapter 6 is a bit of a let down, all that work and then to have them fail with not a lot of description about what happened. Great job overall, just disappointed here at Ch.6 especially this deep into the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely loved this chapter... keep up the great work m8! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great progress by Michael and Neville! Enjoyable chapter. |