| Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn |
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   Blue Luver5000 chapter 4 . 12/16/2020 Great chapter |
| blackruby873 chapter 4 . 12/15/2020 Love it and can’t wait to see what Harry does to get even |
| Jedilogray chapter 4 . 12/15/2020 It is a good chapter. Glad to see it continue. The characters feel real. Thank you. |
| Chancellor Ride chapter 4 . 12/15/2020 Review time! So, felt like a fairly solid chapter that managed to deal with most of our leads feelings after the hospital incident. I like that Tori is the driving force behind keeping Harry and Daphne in more positive moods, making her illness an evermore present threat. Not a huge fan of the goblins having already made a deal with the deaters, but that comes more down to my preference then an actual issue. I think the only issue I had was that this chapter felt weirdly short... And I went back to check and it isn't any shorter than the previous, so I've got no idea where that feeling came from. All in all, a solid chapter. Take your time, and do whatever you need to. Work and life take a far higher priority over the story. We will still be here when life finally allows you to do this again. Until such a time, thanks for the chapter. |
| Urgazhi chapter 4 . 12/15/2020 Glad you're not dead. I enjoyed this chapter, it's good to see Astoria's alive... Be interesting to see what you do to fix her blood curse. |
| bookworm041 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 had to reread the first three chapter cause it's been a bit but I am so happy that this chapter came out. I hope life is going well and dont stress about updating all the time. I at the very least will still be here! |
| Kit Willow chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Great Chapter, looking forward to more updates soon, hopefully |
| Farooq Khichi chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Great chapter. I am so glad to see you back. Please update soon. |
| MarinePotterfan chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Great story |
| Guido41 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Love to see that your back and posting. Can’t wait for more chapters to come and keep up this amazing story. |
| Hank1967 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Excellent chapter! Glad to see you back! Yeah, I might need to go and re-read the last few chapters myself. Glad to see everyone safe and sound. Can't wait to see what's next! |
| Guido41 chapter 1 . 12/14/2020 Omg it’s finally gotten a new chapter |
| JediMage101 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020 Glad to go have you back. And don't sorry if a chapter doesn't have a lot of action. Sometimes the best stores are quit or are seen not heard. Love the story and if I have to wait 50 for another chapter then I will be cause this is one of my favorites on this site. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2020 wheres book 5 |
| Moonydale chapter 3 . 12/3/2020 Its fine!I hope for a quick continuation |