Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn
Blue Luver5000 chapter 4 . 12/16/2020
Great chapter
blackruby873 chapter 4 . 12/15/2020
Love it and can’t wait to see what Harry does to get even
Jedilogray chapter 4 . 12/15/2020
It is a good chapter. Glad to see it continue. The characters feel real. Thank you.
Chancellor Ride chapter 4 . 12/15/2020
Review time!

So, felt like a fairly solid chapter that managed to deal with most of our leads feelings after the hospital incident. I like that Tori is the driving force behind keeping Harry and Daphne in more positive moods, making her illness an evermore present threat. Not a huge fan of the goblins having already made a deal with the deaters, but that comes more down to my preference then an actual issue.

I think the only issue I had was that this chapter felt weirdly short... And I went back to check and it isn't any shorter than the previous, so I've got no idea where that feeling came from.

All in all, a solid chapter. Take your time, and do whatever you need to. Work and life take a far higher priority over the story. We will still be here when life finally allows you to do this again. Until such a time, thanks for the chapter.
Urgazhi chapter 4 . 12/15/2020
Glad you're not dead. I enjoyed this chapter, it's good to see Astoria's alive... Be interesting to see what you do to fix her blood curse.
bookworm041 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
had to reread the first three chapter cause it's been a bit but I am so happy that this chapter came out.
I hope life is going well and dont stress about updating all the time. I at the very least will still be here!
Kit Willow chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Great Chapter, looking forward to more updates soon, hopefully
Farooq Khichi chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Great chapter. I am so glad to see you back. Please update soon.
MarinePotterfan chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Great story
Guido41 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Love to see that your back and posting. Can’t wait for more chapters to come and keep up this amazing story.
Hank1967 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Excellent chapter! Glad to see you back! Yeah, I might need to go and re-read the last few chapters myself. Glad to see everyone safe and sound. Can't wait to see what's next!
Guido41 chapter 1 . 12/14/2020
Omg it’s finally gotten a new chapter
JediMage101 chapter 4 . 12/14/2020
Glad to go have you back. And don't sorry if a chapter doesn't have a lot of action. Sometimes the best stores are quit or are seen not heard. Love the story and if I have to wait 50 for another chapter then I will be cause this is one of my favorites on this site.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2020
wheres book 5
Moonydale chapter 3 . 12/3/2020
Its fine!I hope for a quick continuation
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