Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed your saga and I am sorry it's done. Thank you for your time and talent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter. I was waiting for it for a long time. Can't wait to see how the story progresses. It's really sad about the patients trapped inside. It's exactly the depravity i would expect from Voldemort and Camilla, to attack a bloody hospital. Anyways, hope you write again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the s books i just stared reading book one last week and I have bench read all of them. Can't wait till next chapter. I loved your writing stile. Boo your doing well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, if you still need a Beta I wouldn't mind helping out. Either way though I really love your story. (My gmail is ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story so much! Can’t wait to see where everything goes. These first two chapters were great. I enjoyed seeing Carmila’s POV. After chapter 2 I’m really excited to see the boys together again just the 3 of them on a mini adventure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I meant Ted |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also you should definitely change the name of remus’s kid. He has no reason to nene him tonks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm I agree. They are at war but it’s definitely tough to slug through all the gloom. |
![]() ![]() Big yikes. Feels like the tables turned really quickly from the end of that book to this one's start |
![]() ![]() ![]() The 3rd chapter wasn't published* |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter wasn't published |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this, getting better everytime |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes finally here been waiting along time for you to start book 4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() The vampiress arrogance and overconfidence will be her undoing. She seriously underestimates how strong and powerful Harry has become. But, she'll learn, right before a stake is driven into her chest or she is blown to bits, either one would be fine by me. Her and her kind are a disease anyway that should have been eradicated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you've updated. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm excited to see where the story is going. Please update soon. |