Reviews for Harry Black Book 4: The Coming Dawn
takon65 chapter 3 . 9/16/2020
I have enjoyed your saga and I am sorry it's done. Thank you for your time and talent
Farooq Khichi chapter 3 . 9/15/2020
Really good chapter. I was waiting for it for a long time. Can't wait to see how the story progresses. It's really sad about the patients trapped inside. It's exactly the depravity i would expect from Voldemort and Camilla, to attack a bloody hospital. Anyways, hope you write again soon.
JediMage101 chapter 2 . 9/12/2020
I love the s books i just stared reading book one last week and I have bench read all of them. Can't wait till next chapter. I loved your writing stile. Boo your doing well
The One Above The Rest chapter 2 . 9/10/2020
Hey, if you still need a Beta I wouldn't mind helping out. Either way though I really love your story. (My gmail is )
dylgray chapter 2 . 9/8/2020
Love this story so much! Can’t wait to see where everything goes. These first two chapters were great. I enjoyed seeing Carmila’s POV. After chapter 2 I’m really excited to see the boys together again just the 3 of them on a mini adventure!
kblankenship1025 chapter 2 . 9/5/2020
I meant Ted
kblankenship1025 chapter 2 . 9/5/2020
Also you should definitely change the name of remus’s kid. He has no reason to nene him tonks.
kblankenship1025 chapter 1 . 9/5/2020
Hmm I agree. They are at war but it’s definitely tough to slug through all the gloom.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2020
Big yikes. Feels like the tables turned really quickly from the end of that book to this one's start
Haphne Emeraldplains chapter 1 . 8/28/2020
The 3rd chapter wasn't published*
Haphne Emeraldplains chapter 2 . 8/28/2020
The chapter wasn't published
Bladesman chapter 2 . 8/27/2020
Love this, getting better everytime
Kieser83 chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
Yes finally here been waiting along time for you to start book 4
Matt9917 chapter 1 . 8/22/2020
The vampiress arrogance and overconfidence will be her undoing. She seriously underestimates how strong and powerful Harry has become. But, she'll learn, right before a stake is driven into her chest or she is blown to bits, either one would be fine by me. Her and her kind are a disease anyway that should have been eradicated.
King Cam the 1st chapter 2 . 8/20/2020
I'm so glad you've updated. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm excited to see where the story is going. Please update soon.
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