Man, just... Dayum, this story is just... It is something I didn't expect at all, first was just reading to see how good compared to the others was, but then it hooked me without notice, I got really immersed here, even when English is not my mother language, I struggled with the reading but once I got used and understood the mood and all was just... God, pliz keep doing what you doing, strong support from here to wherever you are, great story till now and thanks for uploading it.

yeah, i'd probably tell the starks to go fuck themselves if i were the cassels.

i would say that i would join their enemies, but that is pretty much the Boltons at this point, and fuck that noise.

I'm... I don't have the words, what the actual fuck is wrong(right?) in his head lmaooo, i love him please don't let him die

Isn't his arm burning too? Bro has not moved his Sword in half an hour lmao

Daddy issues, the fanfic. This is the end of my patience.

I do not know, what you all are complaining about. It is obviously an AU. What's there to complain about after that? Timeline of original series? Its almost the same, as complaining about harry potter fandom tag "epilog - what epilog".

So far this story is understandable. Not easy, mind you, but understandable. I do not know what most of you are complaining abou. Dickens was harder to understand, for example.

If you are used to 3 grade school writing style, its not authors fault.

If you want to complain baselessly? Well, it shows your lack of knowledge and understanding.

I don't understand half of what's written. It's not like the words are hard or anything, I just don't understand what's being said and implied every single time.

I don't understanddddd what did Mullin explain to Luwin about the kid? what's he saying?

Im so confused. Idk what’s happening?

Now that I read the Surviving, I got the old woman somewhat.

Christ. The daddy issues in this fic. You should see someone about that

Personally I find your writing to be a bit much. Everything is so overdone, and you kinda try too hard to make every conversation deep and dramatic and mysterious, which leads you on tangents and rants that become somewhat nonsensical.

I am so confused. What the fuck is going on?

What is Tywin going to do with the children though, clearly they are not his, kill them perhaps? How can he stomach NOT having a heir. Dang... Or am I missing something here?

This was truly a fascinating read

The brilliant rants about history was really intriguing

But none onto the problems of the story

The timeline
I'm more familiar with the start of season one onwards
even reading the wiki the original book series and hundreds of fanfiction I found it very difficult to keep up with Who's Who what was going on in this story

And it quickly became too serious and too many people coming up with too many inventions