wouldn't a huge sowing needle be more logical than a javelin?
because the 1st transfiguration that they learned is a matchstick to a needle...

Best first chapter!

LMAO! I'm just picturing Hermione beating the hell out of the troll with its club. The visuals of that happening are hilarious.

Awesome job. Wonderful story.

Nice, very nice.
There are a few place where it seem some paragraphs aren't in the right order (or even they were forgotten there and should ave been deleted as ideas/scenes that played out differently) but still nice.
Thank you for sharing

great story. thanks for your interpretation of the challenge

good book

A brilliant Story and a very late night I couldn’t afford. But so worth it

The owls lookare you on drugs or what?” I could just see it! I laughed sp much

I always get annoyed at the “he or she” when talking about someone in general. The englush language has a word for that. Its fucking THEY! It just reads so horrid when someone goes “he or she will help you.” How bout “They’ll be able to help.” Much easier, and the second is what everyone says vocally anyways.

I know u dont look on here much anymore but this was amazing i LOVED it

This was a very well thought out and written story.
Kudos
:))

excellent, enjoyable read!

I always like to see Dumbles and the moRon get it.
I like the agreement w/ all the firsties.
Snape having a chance, and using it to good purpose.
Even letting Myrtle hang out was kind.

fun twists and turns.
Thanks!

inept oil-painter? inept fiddler? Is Thanatos talking about Hitler and Nero?

171. The perfect page for that kind of potion.