This chapter was chaos. It leapt from the words in the best way. i do like the solo pairing of this story compared to most of your works. Hopefully the next few chapters will give the main characters a chance to breathe. Until then!

i finally got around to reading this one, is really good though I feel bad for poor Hinata, unless you turn this into a multi pairing, she's gonna end up with a silver medal

This book is so good like the rest of them but this is one of my favorites from you 10/10

in first chapter you put 5th instead of 6th hokage and good in all chapters out so far hope to see more of this and just a dust shop

Ah yes please update this again soon

good heavens so much happened. i need more.

Can wait for the next chapter great work hope youdoing good

Chaos abounds I see. I hope to see more of it.

Awesome chapter

Hahahahaha poor Ozpin and Ironwood their sanity’s not going to hold. Jiraiya with Salem is devious and a good way to mellow her out and Sakura with Ironwood is such a crack ship. I love it.

Kudos

Hmm, seems Naruto is just causing chaos now I feel sorry for Kakashi lol anyways keep up the great work!

i love everything about this story lol. i cant wait for naruto's parents to show up.

Well… Jiraiya always had a thing for beautiful women with massive knockers that were even deadlier than what their bust size would do to his blood pressure…

Yes I’m loving this series, can’t wait for the mothers to meet.