Reviews for The moment that they knew
Blaze Zion chapter 1 . 4/24
These are the type of stories I love to read. I hope I can see your work in NovelStar. There are also a lot of talented writers in that platform. You may check their group on Facebook.
CarlFan2020 chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
Writing is descriptive in the characters' emotions. But could use a little bit of editing, like expanding the words.

And it wouldn't hurt to have the first few chapters including Five's and Vanya's relationship developing before the others could notice, but I respect your choice.

I wonder what will happen in the next chapter. But boy, if Reginald noticed, the result would be disastrous.
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 7 . 8/25/2020
Oh this has all been so cute. Everyone just knowing about the two of them and the cherry on top, the little date night.
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 7 . 8/24/2020
That was so sweet and I loved it