I like this so far. The only thing I would like to say is that although im fine with percy losing in the sword fight, i think it would have been better if percy was winning then qrow did crow transform stuff and giot behind him or something with the sword to his neck. You have to remember that percy not only is a prodigy with the sword, he also has xperience. Qrow may have experience, but percy was able to beat ares at a sword fight with basicly no experience. Then again qrow was able to suprise him with aura. I think that if u had qrow transform it would also make percy realize that people have piowers so he might use his? I dunno honestly. Take my thoughts like a grain of salt. Keep up the good work.

Love it!

Wtf I haven’t even watched fairy tale but this is awesome

Good job man, it is nice to see Percy just does not instawin every fight, especially against an opponent with unknown abilities and a lot of experience like Qrow. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the awsome story

I'm liking this so far, looking forward for the next chapter! )

This is looking really good excited to see what you come up with !

So Percy’s now a villain? Lame!

Ooooh this is really interesting, other RWBY stories I’ve read have always had Percy as the hero or some sort of savior. It also really helps show the desperation he’s feeling, leaving his whole life behind, and starting up a new, darker one.

Keep it up!

This has lots of potential and it looks good.

Seems interesting. I look forward to more. Quick question, apparently the God of Darkness ruled Remnant with his son, so is the God of Light his son and not brother in this AU?

Kind of odd that percy take all the money. Still, the story seems quite nice, keep up the good work man