5 more days
yay

Damn, either this makes Percy and Winter grow even closer or its a relationship-ender, I'll give one guess for what I'm hoping for haha

I think Percy and Pyrrha's older brother - younger sister dynamic might be my favorite thing about this story. I like a lot of other things about it too, but this might be the #1 thing.

Oh no this did not bode well for PercyxWinter (Pinter? Wincy?)

I' m enjoying this A LOT, I only got 3 hours of sleep because I've been binge reading this since yesterday lol... Also I really hope we see more Percy x Winter, I really like how you've written their relationship, including her betrayal and surrender, and would love to see more!

pleasent surprise! definitely loving the choice Percy made at the end of the chapter. I hope he finds out Cinder did Raven in that rage is going to be so carthartic

YEAH LETS GOO PERCY FUCK EM UP! SHOW THEM THE BLOOD OF THE GODS THAT FLOW IN YOUR VEINS

A 10:10 chapter,
Ozpin threatening Percy while in the body of an out of shape Teenager...

Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing your doing great work please continue the story it's amazing

oh daddy ill hope you love me again

Just finished binging this and losing 4 consecutive days of sleep, but I’m finally done. I’m still sad it’s over though. On to the review.

Grammer: 9.5/10. There’s almost no grammatical or spelling errors. Some of the formatting was a little off but nothing outrageous. It was basically perfect. Everything flows well, dialogue isn’t choppy and the descriptions are precise.

Worldbuilding: 10/10. This is one of the few stories that actually show all of the RWBY world. Every region we know about plays a part, the history and culture plays a role and Vacuo is an actual place instead of this universe’s forgotten trash bin.

Chatacters: 10/10. Every character has screentime, from main characters to side characters. We get backstories, personalities and motivations. And they’re not one dimensional characters, they’re perfectly fleshed out. Cinder isn’t just a dumb evil bitch. Raven isn’t just a cowardly bitch. Salem’s side of the story is taken into consideration. Hell even Qrow gets shown mad love. But our main character, we see the most growth with him. Now everyone has their own perception of Percy Jackson as a character. Some have already said that this iteration of him is definitely OOC, but that’s alright. As the author, you’ve tried to stay true to the original source. Sure this Percy might do more paperwork than the original one (and in my head, I can’t imagine the original doing any paperwork), and he might have moved on from Annabeth fast, but at his core he’s still similar to the original. He isn’t evil, he’s just tired. But I do like how deep you’ve gone into his immortal side and how divinity is affecting him. How he has urges that aren’t typical like drowning the whole world. But he still values loyalty. The only character I’m not a big fan of is Monty. It’s a wonderful reference and homage to the big man himself (RIP MONTY). But he definitely plays into the annoying, plot blocker type of God. He’s not a Deus Ex Machina, he’s kind of a dick to be honest. A lot of Percy’s problems would be solved if he could tell people his knowledge, but that wouldn’t benefit the plot.

Overall, I’d give this fic a 9.8/10. It’s a good read and definitely a good story to reread a couple of times. The action is good and clean. Some parts of they story might feel like it’s being slow, but overall the story kept me engaged. I almost couldn’t stop reading a couple of times. Honestly, this story will keep you reading the same way that some Coeur Al’ Aran fics do.

Thank you Curious Beats for making this fanfic, sharing it on the internet and making it free to read. Thank you for providing me with a couple of laughs and for providing me a distraction from daily life for a time.

Reunited

Great update can't wait for the next one

Merry Christmas to those who celebrate and a happy holiday season to those who don't.

I thought Raven was dead? How can they talk to her?