Amazing story, I really like the crime elements in the story, and I also like Percy's interactions with Monty Oum. You've written a great and unique story and I hope you continue to do so. One thing I do wish you would do though is if in a future chapter you could do an interlude or something similar where the POV would be from a different character. I just think it would be interesting what others would think of Percy.

I just gotta say that I think this is an amazing chapter with the gang thing going on and I really hope the crime path gets continued. It would be funny if Qrow comes back to the city and sees Percy as the crime lord of the city.

"got back into trading."
couldn't resist the whatever the fuck it is that's going on in GME huh?

anyway an in topic comment. I greatly enjoy this fic, although I feel the it has slowed down lately. Makes sense though, not everything Percy does can be fast.

Just a quick question, wouldn't Winter Schnee be the same age as Percy (17 because I think she's 5 years older than Weiss) if you haven't thought of something to do with her yet, it would be a suggestion, however I assume you have with how much you've mentioned the SDC. Also wouldn't Adam be around 14-15 as pyhrra is just turning 13 here and Blake is around the same age it just seems like your portraying him a bit older than he should be, and along with that you could add Blake to their meetings later on.

Thanks
Jackraf510

Yo the story is really great so far. Love that Percy is slowly building himself up in the world instead of immediately becoming a major player in Remnant. Looking forward to more of the story my friend.

Really good and I enjoyed it. Looking forward to next chapter.

I love it how thought through everything is. Even tho I never watched rwby or any anime for that matter I understand the politics and characters that were shown really good. Have to look a couple names up every now and then but that's not important.
Also i really love how you show Pyrrha and Percys relationship. Could also be interesting later when she attends to beacon(uhm she does that right?) because her loyalty's lie more with someone else and she is made more powerful or at least different.
That's it
Cya Yesse and I hope I didn't totally make a fool out of myself by my assumptions.

great chapter mate, Really like the wholesome moment between Percy and Pyrrha. Really looking forward to what you give us next though there is one thing I'm wondering and that's are you planning to address Percy's goddly power anytime soon? I'm not saying on par with the actual gods but he is a demigod and has a good sense of power over the land and sea. Are we gonna see any of that power soon? or am I just being an idiot and forgetting that has been mentioned before? has it?

Next update on my birthday, Woohoo!

This was a great chapter. To say that I was laughing when I read how Percy had kicked Pyrrha in the face would be an understatement. He straight up kicked a 12 YEAR OLD in the face. That was fantastic.

I wonder is Percy gonna have a relationship as only two of my head would be around his age as he was 17 during The Hero of Olympus book are Cinder and Winter give a year or two and maybe Neo being at least two years younger. Also, I like that you are showing more Percy in teacher mode I just think of him Emulating his inner Chiron as he teaches

Another great chapter. My haymaker guess is that Alexandros will try to setup Pyrrha with Percy in the far distant future.

Percy didn't expect kindness huh

This makes no sense. There are so many OTHER things for Percy to do. Anyway love your premise.

I love the introduction of Pyrrha, though it did seem a little quick. It felt like it didn't have much of an impact, though if this is from Percy's point of view, maybe it wasn't supposed to have much of an impact on him. Anyway, I kinda want to see their relationship develop into something strong, whether that's a sibling or mentor/student relationship is up in the air. Just some thoughts I had. Take them as you will, cause either way, I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.