This is a great description of that scene, focusing on her thoughts, feelings, regrets, dreams, and desires. I really like how you delved into their thoughts here, the give and take of wanting contrasting with conquest and allure on his side, anger and determination on hers.

Silly man, you'll have to live with that and it's your fault.

That was so good 3

OUCH

Beautifully written! Well done! :)

AAAAAH I love this so much! Beautifully written and the ending is a gut punch but perfect (you know how I love angst). SO GOOD.

Oh I loved this. Beautifully written!

OH MY - this takes you on one hell of a ride. This is so passionate and vivid it's actually made my temperature rise! owo wowie, this is actually so good it's addictive. MANNNNN this makes me want an Erik even more - that prompt is brilliantly put to use. The inner conflict makes the scene that more passionate when she is lost in Erik's passion-filling haze, there is nothing short of Erik being seductive as hell in this one and exactly embodies the song 'Beneath a Moonless Sky' probably even better than the song itself. It takes the meaning of the song and portays it with an intesntiy that is too strong to deny. In a way there is a sort of equilibrium between those two and this is when I can see Erik being as much as a drug to Christine as she is to him. And I say, the ending is heart-crushingly brilliant. Brava, Brava Bravisisma.
(sorry for my rambling, but I wanted to let you know what I thought hehe)!
Merci,
Enigma.

Ooh, this is so well done. Really good.

Nice job!

Nah! Nicely written, but Nah! :)

Ahhhhh sooooo good. I love the description of the kiss from Christine's perspective. So much repressed desire! I love it!