Reviews for A Haunting
black-ladyToronado-power chapter 2 . 7/10/2017
Diego saved by two enemies nicely done
QueenNaberrie chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
Very interesting. It has a Christmas Carol type of theme. Only it is both Gilberto de la Vega (aka Risendo) & Luis Ramon trying to put right some wrongs they both caused in life.
Lydia Hunter chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
Holy crap, this is really good! And properly chilling in places, too. I think I jumped a little when Victoria turned around to see Ramone's ghost sitting in her kitchen. And both ghosts talking about how they'd love to be warm again.
WolfDaughter chapter 2 . 9/7/2005
This is a very good story, but it feels unfinished. What becomes of the Governor's visit? Is DeSoto pardoned for killing a royal emmissary? Does he change? What happens to Zorro? Does he continue on as he has in the past, only with Victoria now in the know? Can they convince the Pueblo that Victoria is in love with Diego now instead of Zorro without giving themselves away? How does Don Alejandro react when he finds out the truth? There are just too many questions left unanswered. Would you consider posting another chapter or perhaps a sequel? Pretty pretty please?
jtbwriter chapter 2 . 10/15/2003
This deserved to win-it is a wonderful story!
crimson nova chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
I like this one so far. Keep up the good work.
Teri chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
I am so glad you posted this here. As always, love all your stories!