Reviews for Re:Zero Hour |
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RandomGuest chapter 2 . 1/26/2022 I just chuckkled so hard i spat my drink XD you owe me a water that was frickin hilarious at the end! I like- HAHAHA |
Rob chapter 11 . 1/26/2022 Really enjoy reading this! Hope you come out with the next chapter soon! |
palik chapter 9 . 12/29/2021 My man really came back, posted 2 chapters and then left again with no explenation Why must you hurt us this way |
slydino chapter 11 . 11/13/2021 Wonderful story. Very interested to see how you handle some of the mistakes Subaru has made. Anyway great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
KazeelBaYz chapter 11 . 11/13/2021 Sora... well I guess the Hiatus is alright though unfortunate. I'm grateful for all of the chapters you had posted and the arts you created. However, it'll be really good if you occasionally drop down to draw more Subaru and Satella Arts! |
NightSoro chapter 11 . 11/10/2021 Great chapter ! |
FoxRiver3 chapter 11 . 11/10/2021 It is very likely that Satella and Subaru loved each other in the past (previous incarnation), although Subaru has forgotten all about it, but that would explain why he felt something so strong when he met the real Satella for the first time, as if it was engraved in the deepest part of his soul, it even scared him. But that's precisely why, if this is the truth, then there would be nothing unfair or illegitimate for Subaru to let her have priority, in the same way that he let Emilia have priority with Rem, (since he would have devoted himself to Satella, even before he met Emilia, but would have forgotten her). On the other hand, if you decide to follow the harem way, please, avoid to make Subaru an unfaithful, perfidious and perverse... Before committing himself with Rem in a relationship, Subaru was waiting for Emilia's agreement, which means that if Emilia refused and forced him to choose, he would surely choose Emilia, as she was the first one and all his adventures, deaths and sufferings always revolve around her, for the majority.. So make sure that things are clear with each of them before going further, not hidden, that this polygamy (unilateral) is accepted by Satella and the others decently, after careful consideration. Otherwise it's just a banal and unhealthy harem, where the hero does not leave the choice to any girl by selfishness, greed, gluttony and lust. They deserve better than that and there's no need to put Subaru in couple with all the pretty girls in the world, you don't need to abuse the tolerance of women, not to mention that they are also a bit jealous and that each woman needs a certain personal investment and I'm talking about sex, but romance, attention, complicity, in short, a certain relational depth, that you can't assume with 10 womens... So once engaged and married to them, he has to make do with them, no question of having mistresses or schemes behind their backs, it's not because you have several women that you can't be faithful just to them. Among the lucky ones, privilege only the one that Satella values and with whom Subaru has a real accounting, not just the carnal stimulants. This is too superficial to last and Subaru is a rather reserved person. Satella (the original), Emilia and Rem are good choices of course, from a value, dedication and personality point of view, when it comes to Subaru. Shaula, Crusch, Beatrice could also pass, not to mention the fact that Subaru liked Crusch as a woman., Shaula waited for him 400 years and said to have loved him as Satella, then Beatrice maintains a special relationship with him that we can't just qualify as brother and sister because of their contracts, Beatrice's age and their abnormal closeness or even the fact that she is placed just after Emilia and Rem in his ranking of the people who matter most to him. They all have a good excuses to be accepted by Satella. But apart from them, the other women are quite different from him, not complicit enough and Petra-Melli are just too young psychologically to decide their future seriously. Of course, I say all this only to avoid that such a relationship leaves a bitter taste to some mass of people and that it is a minimum romantic, nothing more :). I also hope that if Subaru and Satella end up doing what you're referring to, at least try not to do it anyhow, on a whim, already because it's very intimate and because we never forget our first times, that's why it's better to do it in a good way, so that we can keep a memory of it that we can be proud of and not have regrets. By the way, if you make sexual scenes, be careful not to make them too explicit, especially in "T fiction". You might get your chapters deleted because of the reports. Be subtle and concise. This was a very good chapter! |
Dylandidi10 chapter 11 . 11/10/2021 The relationship between Ram and Roswaal is not nearly as pure and good as you might think. If you have read the light novels, you should know this. Roswaal's real motivations and implications in the tragedy of the Oni clan village and his lies. Ram's hatred for Roswaal linked to his sister, his disgust, his forced contract for Rem's sake, his excessive dependence close to Stockholm syndrome that forces her to throw away all dignity, idealized Roswaal and forgave most of the vile selfish actions he committed, without caring about morality. (Especially after she forgot her sister...) Her so-called love for Roswaal is corrupted, she naively thinks that without his gospel he will be a good person... But let's not forget that Ram also developed a similar syndrome in an alternative arc with Subaru, proving that she is indeed prone to this kind of thing. But then, it must have been very easy to manipulate her, after all, she was only a child when a vicious Roswaal, with centuries of experience, took her and her sister in. He had all the time he wanted to influence her, to charge her with bad things, like Elsa with Melli and to educate her in order to make her what he wanted her to be, a faithful tool for his cause... And it's even worse, if we add to all this, his forced contract and isolation in a manor itself isolated for several years, with Roswaal that she has always served... Making Ram and Roswaal's relationship even more impure, not to mention the generational gap between them. It's like a grandfather controlling an immature girl and even though he may have grown attached to her, because she is the only one who has cared about him for a long time and he can use her weakness to his advantage to be close to her. He is only using her and he is ready to sacrifice her at any time for his own interest and for Echidna. This has not been explained yet it seems to me but, there is no trick to find the door of Beatrice I believe, it is surely the strong affinity with the unique spirits of Subaru that allows him to do that. Beatrice with her library, does not fear Roswaal, Puck in his normal form, Elsa or the great white rabbit. Satella has mysterious abilities, but I don't think she can deactivate all the bishops' abilities. The author said that if the Witch of Lust and her bishop were to fight, it would be very close. Regulus' offensive power is also superior to many of the witches. Subaru should not be able to use the authority of laziness, since Satella does not have it and time has gone back to a time when Betelgeuse is still alive... The authorities generate a power whose form and power vary enormously according to the soul which holds it. |
codywhite162 chapter 11 . 11/9/2021 This is an absolutely amazing story and I cannot wait for the next chapter! I am excited for Subaru to train using the Authority of Envy and also Felt is going to be trying to kill him? That is shocking! Regardless you have me hooked on what is to come |
Starmegalo chapter 11 . 11/8/2021 Everything is super enjoyable in this fic but one thing... Just bothers me. Felt... Subaru calling himself Arcbishop of envy, Felt knowing what authorities are... Calling it witch magic like it's a common knowledge... Nope no way. And now she will be enemy? that was obvious but I hoped I was wrong... Also if you are going to write about how OP Reinhard is you are not wrong but Because of the current state of thing's... Satella is just stronger. What I mean Canon Subaru and his insanity with RbD, relationships and his obsessions makes him the most dangerous character period... Satella and Reinhard might be strong and OP as fuck and there is Pandora but from objective point of view... Subaru is just beyond them all, the way he move forwards just too fucking terrifying. But in this fic Subaru doesn't have that type of thing, Satella quite controls the relationship which is not possible if Subaru was stubborn , determined and wicked as he is in canon... I can imagine the reply when Envy said "İf you use contract İ kill her" Subaru probably would make that one sick smile he did in Pride if when Petelguese said Emilia will die then would proceed to make an infinite loop until Envy becomes his slave... Not that it is hard considering... Whatever but back to Reinhard, the way you handle authorities just makes Satella strongest since Subaru can just insert a witch gene into Reinhard and he can't use any DP'S if Subaru can't learn this then Satella should already know how to do it even Louise did lmao... Divided the witch gene. Tappei confirmed btw, if witch gene comes then all divine protections goes and Reinhard won't turn into god with that since he is the most incompatible person with that. I always believed Pride being unable to kill Reinhard is BS since there are at least 2 legit ways and 3 if Pride baru went to the FUCKİNG SAGE. Actually... Why Reinhard even become her knight when she is bloodlusted... Lmao impossible. So yeah... The biggest problem hoe |
Dylandidi10 chapter 10 . 11/7/2021 There are still major inconsistencies in the power of the characters... Some of them are too underestimated, others are greatly overestimated. After a new fictional development is obviously not excluded, but it's hard to believe. Envie (and not Satella) through Subaru or Emilia can destroy the world, so it's not Rem who will stand up to her when she was easily defeated with her horn by a bishop. Envie, is also too humanized, his relationship with Subaru is almost impossible, Subaru is in love with the real Satella, the original, the one he talked to at the tea party. Envy is the one responsible for most of Subaru's suffering because of his selfishness, to see him share a too pronounced intimacy with her without a reciprocal love, endorsed by Satella and the girls he loves, would be unhealthy and perfidious. Not to mention that it would be no different than prostitution, in the sexual realm. Also, Rem is not a monster, she has nothing in common with Envie, Satella, or Emilia yes, but not her. Speaking of her, it would be ridiculous if Emilia didn't know things that Rem would be about Subaru... |
Dylandidi10 chapter 9 . 11/6/2021 The nature of too many things changes with the original story... Since when can Rem repel invisible hands with her mana? Especially the one generated by Satella's power? Even with her horn Betelgeuse has turned her into a disjointed puppet, while she is infinitely inferior to the witch of envy and laziness. It is also stated that at a certain distance from the mansion and therefore from the forbidden library, Beatrice loses most of her powers, not being able to do more than match Ram in combat, without her horn... The magical fruits are not supposed to have undesirable side effects either, if my memory is good. Isn't it just a scenaristic facility to justify the presence of Beatrice? |
Sora 101 chapter 1 . 11/6/2021 Imagine reviewing your own story to make an update. God, what kind of asshole am I lol? But honestly, I'd rather do this than have a notification alert everyone, so here we go. Story's on Hiatus indefinitely! Not sure when I'll be coming back, but it'll probably happen when s3 comes around? Maybe? Who knows? Working on a project atm: A video game! Very ambitious and definitely quite the undertaking, but I have the people, assets needed to create it, and permission from the team that made the original game to make this fanmade spinoff! All my chips are pulled over there, so you probably won't hear from me for a while! Thanks for enjoying Re:Zero Hour! Until next time~! |
NightSoro chapter 8 . 11/5/2021 It's ridiculous. Envy is not Satella, she is the incarnation of the capital sin of envy in all its splendor, so nobody should be more jealous and possessive than her. She is more of a nuisance who cohabits with Satella by force, resulting from its incompatibility, than anything else. An evil parasite... It doesn't matter if Subaru pretends to care about her too or not, Envy doesn't think about her welfare, she just wants to monopolize it with her impure love and desire, the mere idea of sharing it with other women should revolt her more than anyone else. Moreover Subaru loves Satella without knowing why, but not the witch of envy, he even said in arc 6 that she exasperated him by telling him I love you constantly and obsessively... We never heard her really converse with anyone. She always says the same thing, no matter what is said back to her. It is clearly the genes of envy that have generated this corrupted, deranged and selfish personality, the consciousness of envy, more than a real schizophrenia. I have nothing against the fact that you deform the characters, but then, at least annotate in the description of your fiction that they are perhaps a little "OC". |
FoxRiver3 chapter 8 . 11/4/2021 Emilia should have no problem to get rid of a group of mabeats of lower rank. Even Rem could do it and Emilia is more powerful than her... Not to mention her combat experience. As Felix said, Emilia is not so fragile... She was able to beat one of the phalanxes of Betelgeuse. Also, it seems to me that Subaru was one of the rare exception to be able to see the invisible hands. I don't remember seeing that the cultists could see the hands of Betelgeuse... Not to mention that the cult has no real connection with Satella, but Pandora. |