Reviews for My Heart's Desire
david.teague.3950 chapter 1 . 9/28
I'll admit this chapter was cute, I half wonder if you guys plan to have Naruto Master Senjutsu before Jiraiya dies, I'm almost positive that the two of you could paint a perfect image of Jiraiya's jealousy over Naruto mastering something that he himself hasn't been able to.
AkashimaUchiha chapter 1 . 9/25
Nice story, Sara is a great character for him. I'm pleasantly surprised of the plot. Also wondering why hasn't it been done... looking forward to next.
Kami no Sennin chapter 1 . 9/17
I really enjoyed your co-op story. To speak truthfully, Sāra is my favorite movie heroine that Naruto encounters and I really liked the dynamic those two shared. Seemed obvious to me if they were allowed to stay with each other they'd eventually get together. Also, awesome decision to further along her knowledge and ability with her own powers. No need for her to be a damsel in distress.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16
I’m so glad there is a good fan fiction with a Naruto x Sara pairing, especially with it being so recently written! Please update it often. I’d love to see the end of it. You two did a great job and I do appreciate your work.
Gamma-X chapter 1 . 9/15
"who then stabbed it into the interface and" Uh...i think you forgot to add some words.
Also, aren't the villagers, at this point in time, supposed to hate Naruto? And give him outrageous prices for clothing and food? So..why's everyone so nice around him? I was expecting a lot of glares being sent his way since he didn't save them yet.
Anyways, this is rather interesting. I'd like to see what a Dragon Vein Kunoichi can become..
Keep up the good work!

Ja Ne~!
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 1 . 9/11
Love the story so far and can't wait to read more.
xirons20 chapter 1 . 9/9
Muy buen inicio
Me encanta esta pareja
calderoneric758 chapter 1 . 9/9
Please more i love this rare pairing
Master-of-Mythology chapter 1 . 9/8
I'm glad to see this story. This is one of my favorite pairings and it's so rare to see.
SSG Gohan teen chapter 1 . 9/8
I love that you brought Sara back to the future with Naruto and can't wait to see how things develop moving foward.
surya25addanki chapter 1 . 9/7
They are adorable
Jose19 chapter 1 . 9/7
I see you are using Sara from the movie this is good to see because I like pairings that are unique plus the girl is attractive as well.
Slick21 chapter 1 . 9/7
I dont even review like that but I never knew how much I needed this pairing Great Work
RubyR3dRose chapter 1 . 9/7
Great start! Looking forward to more chapters.
KakeruPB chapter 1 . 9/7
Oh, man this was great. Not only that it is very uncommon but very attractive pairing but u did it justice. Great work like always and keep up the amazing work. I always liked Naruto more with the filler character's. They always fit him better in my opinion. Now that I think bout it the confrontation between Shizuka and Sara is going to be explosive isn't it? Well at least Kushina would approve her, that i'm sure.
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