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Captainunknown chapter 28 . 14h Is this still getting updated or is it gone forever more? |
Akenoou chapter 1 . 9/27 Pls continue this I need more |
Rehagio chapter 23 . 9/19 "''''Also, for those of you who keep pushing me to get to Shirou x Artoria time, I've repeatedly said that isn't the only part of this fic and that it will take a long time to get there.''''' THA'ST THE ONLY PART THAT MATTERS. Instead of going with what you promised people and the summary says, you had Artoria pointlessly changing history "just because" when it doesn't affect Shirou at all just to involve all kind of random characters and give them all happy ending. Why the fuck are 99% are here or still around? Why the fuck Gilgamesh is still around? Why did you add everyone and everything? Why the fuck is Morgan helping fucking Sakura? Why is Hakunon or whatever involved? Who fucking cares about these people? Why the fuck is Ereshigal and Ishtar are here? The premise is "Artoria wants to get back to Shirou and give him a happy life. Artoria x Shirou" What you actually wrote? 1- Artoria doing pointless shit and treating Shirou as an optional side quest. 2- No ShirouxArtoria in freaking 400k words. 3- Adding all kind of characters that don't matter and shouldn't be even involved. 4- Shirou developing relationships with everyone but Artoria so you have that stupid idea of making it a harem 5- Wank everyone not called Artoria. 6- Shit on Artoria and Shirou and make them side characters that only exists to give happy ending for random side-characters. Giving Shirou power doesn't mean you didn't make him a useless character. 7- a bloated mess of a cast and too many people on Shirou's side that any conflict is forced as fuck and wouldn't make sense. 8- 400K of nothing but telling a story about everyone BUT Shirou and Artoria. 9- For some insane reason, you decided to wank everyone. Why the fuck is Sakura given OP shit for no reason? Rin? Everyone else? 10 No ArtoriaxShirou again. It's VERY CLEAR that you don't actually want to write the premise. You want to write about everyone BUT Shirou and Artoria and used Artoria as plot device to get everyone, and ShirouxArtoria to make the fic popular. Just drop the ArtoriaxShirou pairing. That's now what you want to write, be honest. Drop Shirou from the tag too, because this isn't his story at all. |
NaNanAnA chapter 28 . 9/19 So i was bored and looking back on older comments... So Response to red skull 564: Buddy, you need to work on your reading comprehension Your response to Warning to new readers of you're here for Shirou, Saber or Shirou and Saber relationship romantic or otherwise then don't bother. Are you fucking serious? The story is 400k words but, oh, there is a scene of Shirou feeding Artoria! OMG! HOW COULD I'VE MISSED THAT? It's not even fucking romantic. That shit could exist in literally any Fate fic. And that's the fucking point. The author decided to waste 400k words on bloated cast of side characters that no one came here for in a time period that would make ArtoriaxShirou impossible instead of fucking skipping forward ages ago! It's fucking bigger than multiple Harry Potter books! Your response to This is just a bait and Artoria is just a plot device so the author can suck off all the other characters not called Shirou and Artoria and write about them instead. Lmao. Are you even reading what I'm writing? THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I'M CALLING OUT. This is sucking off the side characters that no one gives a fuck about when they were promised ArtoriaxShirou and instead we wasted 400k on Sakura bitch (As if Morgan would ever give a shit about random girl and gives her all that power-ups), Rin and her father, and whole ass bloated cast of side-characters... etc Like read what I'm fucking saying. EVERYTHING YOU LISTED IS THE PROBLEM! Your response to He even freaking made Shirou be Gilgamesh's servant. Who fucking cares about trash SI-Kun? I don't care about how Gilgamesh treat him, but any Shirou acting as Gilgamesh servant is trash that is only Shirou In Name Only. And lol, about "destroying worlds". No, he can't do that, lmao. Artoria with Avalon can fuck him up, and if UBW Shirou can, then so can any OP Shirou fuck that asshole up. Your response to This fic has nothing to do with the summary or the tags, don't be fooled. The only things that are true are the events that happened BEFORE the story began. No, this ShirouxArtoria isn't true and only exist to bait people for the harem of stupid characters like Sakura who the writer clearly wants to talk about. Again. This is just a bait story and the writer clearly love Sakura and some random side characters that wants to wank them and give them "happy ending". Artoria is just a plot device, and her and Shirou only exists to wank those characters and make them happy. That's the summary of 400k words of waste of space and time. |
Kan07 chapter 28 . 9/20 Awesome chapter |
bchen3 chapter 28 . 9/9 I really hope this story continues! It's so good! Please update some time soon! |
codywhite162 chapter 28 . 9/9 I am still very much enjoying the story and cannot wait to find out what happens next. |
Akenoou chapter 27 . 9/7 When are you gonna update my dear lord and savior |
WeAreTheWord chapter 28 . 8/30 I like this story but the main problem I have with this whole story is the sheer amount of exposition. There’s so much stuff being explained that the whole thing ends up feeling way to long winded |
red skull 564 chapter 18 . 8/30 Update when? |
Spedyalarm chapter 28 . 8/26 ... So Tamamo loves Hakuno... Lesbian... Well, Now I hope that somehow, someway, Merlin or someone else gets them into a threesome of sorts with Shirou in the future... You know... For 'Future Generations' |
Spedyalarm chapter 27 . 8/26 Wait... so Tamamo-no-mae x Hakuno? That doesn't make sense... Or is it Tamamo-no-mae x Shirou, because Shirou helps Hakuno, and Hakuno is like a younger-sister figure? |
nexusplayer chapter 28 . 8/26 I wonder what happens next? Will Chu meet Shirou? Will Chiron meet Hercules? Will Adam finally be summoned in a Fate fanfiction? Will Buddha appear? Let's find out! |
Spedyalarm chapter 24 . 8/26 ... Wait... so does that mean that FGO is still going to happen? Holy shit that'll be AMAZING TO SEE! PLEASE MAKE THAT HAPPEN! PLEASE! |
Spedyalarm chapter 23 . 8/26 Arturia is now Arturia Lily... Huh. |