What Gogogodzilla said.

Not a bad update. Although, there were some paragraphs that might've been typed a little too hastily.
For example; there was one sentence that, I think, should have read ". . . to the dissatisfaction of the Psi Corps and EA delegation."

This is a very well written story, but... you've spent three chapters and 15,000 words presenting the setting. The final battle between the Federation/Klingons/Earth Alliance and the Aschen. Please move forward and actually have the story progress!

I forgot to add I just love the crew of the Pagh, too!

Hi Albert,

Norjc here. I like this chapter. I will send you a PM with my email address shortly. Thanks!

Looking forward to more cultural clashes!

If the Technomages show up, I bet it'll because they want to get ahold of the advanced Subspace and Matter-Energy Conversion Tech.

If anything could truly raise their capabilities to the point where Technology essentially BECOMES Magic, it's what the Federation has to offer.

Meanwhile, it would be interesting to see what The Federation as a who,e would think of the Technomages and their particular philosophy...

Woot, another update! Thanks for bleeping this story going, what an absolute treat to find this blast from the past is still alive!

You might want to proofread this a bit; there are some parts near the middle that read very awkwardly. Otherwise it was a good chapter, even though not much actually happened to advance the plot.

Thanks for another update, Skeet. Take care from us guys from Creative Forum

Gotta agree with the previous poster; Chang was very critical of the houses that sent ships in without rear shields.

No way did he tell anyone to turn them off or anything like that.

So either this was a mistake or something has been changed from TTV.

man, i came to reread the original story and find this gem. Thank you for keeping it up. this is one of my top ten novellas.

Hi Albert,

Nice continuation! One thing Kirk, Spock or Tynen should be discussing or considering (though I probably wouldn't place it in my log if I were them) is the suspicion or fact (from Section 31 at Regulus) that Chang was one of the conspirators in the planned coup against the Chancellor and the Fed president and could he be angling for a war between the two powers while his fellow conspirators are probably moving away from that desire considering how well the war with the Minbari is going and how both powers have thrived from it. I think that would be an interesting angle to examine. Anyway, drop me a line sometime!

NorJC

Please finish the storyline; It is still hanging...

OK! Enough soul searching. Open fire!

Nice (if thinly-disguised) recap of the first volume. :-)