|Reviews for A Thin Veneer: The Knife's Edge|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6
You were accusing the last writer of stating that the minbari were without logic?the original earth minbari war was a testament to would never have pursued this action had he survived. A holy war?the elimination of an entire species?for the death of one,even as beloved as dukat?and had not they found Sinclair with the spirit of valen they would've gone on with their are the very embodiment of the shadows.
| Louie Pastiche chapter 3 . 8/1/2022
What Gogogodzilla said.
| Carycomic chapter 3 . 8/1/2022
Not a bad update. Although, there were some paragraphs that might've been typed a little too hastily.
For example; there was one sentence that, I think, should have read ". . . to the dissatisfaction of the Psi Corps and EA delegation."
| gogogodzilla chapter 3 . 4/17/2022
This is a very well written story, but... you've spent three chapters and 15,000 words presenting the setting. The final battle between the Federation/Klingons/Earth Alliance and the Aschen. Please move forward and actually have the story progress!
| SupercatOneTwoThree chapter 2 . 3/7/2022
I forgot to add I just love the crew of the Pagh, too!
| SupercatOneTwoThree chapter 3 . 3/6/2022
Norjc here. I like this chapter. I will send you a PM with my email address shortly. Thanks!
| Monshroud chapter 3 . 2/15/2022
Looking forward to more cultural clashes!
If the Technomages show up, I bet it'll because they want to get ahold of the advanced Subspace and Matter-Energy Conversion Tech.
If anything could truly raise their capabilities to the point where Technology essentially BECOMES Magic, it's what the Federation has to offer.
Meanwhile, it would be interesting to see what The Federation as a who,e would think of the Technomages and their particular philosophy...
| majorshane chapter 3 . 2/1/2022
Woot, another update! Thanks for bleeping this story going, what an absolute treat to find this blast from the past is still alive!
| ThanosofTitan chapter 3 . 1/29/2022
You might want to proofread this a bit; there are some parts near the middle that read very awkwardly. Otherwise it was a good chapter, even though not much actually happened to advance the plot.
| KclCmdr chapter 3 . 1/29/2022
Thanks for another update, Skeet. Take care from us guys from Creative Forum
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2021
Gotta agree with the previous poster; Chang was very critical of the houses that sent ships in without rear shields.
No way did he tell anyone to turn them off or anything like that.
So either this was a mistake or something has been changed from TTV.
| pointlessjourney chapter 2 . 12/16/2021
man, i came to reread the original story and find this gem. Thank you for keeping it up. this is one of my top ten novellas.
| NorJC chapter 2 . 10/5/2021
Nice continuation! One thing Kirk, Spock or Tynen should be discussing or considering (though I probably wouldn't place it in my log if I were them) is the suspicion or fact (from Section 31 at Regulus) that Chang was one of the conspirators in the planned coup against the Chancellor and the Fed president and could he be angling for a war between the two powers while his fellow conspirators are probably moving away from that desire considering how well the war with the Minbari is going and how both powers have thrived from it. I think that would be an interesting angle to examine. Anyway, drop me a line sometime!
| WD chapter 2 . 9/7/2021
Please finish the storyline; It is still hanging...
| Carycomic chapter 2 . 8/20/2021
OK! Enough soul searching. Open fire!