|Reviews for A Thin Veneer: The Knife's Edge
| c-wolf chapter 1 . 10/30/2020
I'm glad you did a new part to the universe
| Mf0012 chapter 1 . 10/29/2020
Great chapter, you really know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seats!
| SpartanCommander chapter 1 . 10/29/2020
You know I was rereading the story a bit and i realized a tactic that would be highly profitable and useful for the League of non allined worlds could do that would stillkeep them out of the war but also be able to help influence a bit. Instead of appealing to the Feds or klingons appeal to the Earth Alliance with a lend lease polasy offer to let them borrow old mothballed and unused Non-allienged ships in exchange for temporary custody of Human colonies their for if the Ashen or Membari attack those worlds it's now the legue's territory now and thus the Membari would looks face considrably if some of those holdings were attacked. This was it opens a way for them to likely have some extra effort since Earth force does have some access to old tech and thus with the new improved relations after the war's over they could possibly reinstate the humans into the league and with the improved ships they likely help expand the league influance and safety.
The lend lease polosy is also a great way to get gain stuff without and to supply someone with stuff without being involved.
(Earth force giving up colonies that they can't defend or help and give the survival of the colonists a better chance under the protection of the league would probably be something the president would seriously consider.)
| The Sithspawn chapter 1 . 10/22/2020
Great to have this back! :D Finally got around to reading it :)
And it was beautiful!
Can't wait for more! :D
| cko2 chapter 1 . 9/29/2020
Weird look into the minds of the other side in the war and nice to see someone carry one some work on the story since it seems to have fallen out of favor for anything new one it at least. Thanks for sharing.
| Carycomic chapter 1 . 9/19/2020
Nice expansion on the preview provided in ch. 83 of ATV. And, like the original Star Trek series, a very thought-provoking expansion, as well.
| abracursix chapter 1 . 9/18/2020
Excellent chapter. Nice to know that you're continuing the story through this sequel. Can't wait to see the battle. Will Chang try to backstab Kirk? And will Kirk have a means to deal with it? When the Federation is going to start using the warp drive while in hyperspace?
| stark40763 chapter 1 . 9/14/2020
An excellent beginning, though that's hardly surprising!
| salamangkero chapter 1 . 9/13/2020
Nice to see you back.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
| Armiture chapter 1 . 9/13/2020
Glad to see the saga continues and I look forward to reading more of it as you write it.
| skelly78 chapter 1 . 9/12/2020
Good to see this story continue. Hopefully the Minbari will find out the truth behind the Vorlons and shadows war eventually. That would piss them off even more.
| Tryglaw chapter 1 . 9/12/2020
Greetings, Skeet. It's truly great to see this continued. :D
A question - seeing as LC has been purged from SB, and Ash's Boomstick has likewise left, and with both of them posting their stories on the Sietch (LC's completed "A Fighting Chance" is available there, and we're told a sequel is soon to follow) , would you be willing to cross-post your story there?
| Inquisitor0 chapter 1 . 9/11/2020
Thought ATV was finished but glad that there's a sequel. Considering that Starfleet ships have very long range sensors they can scan star systems that haven't been explored by jumpspace. They'll likely send probes all around nearby sectors if they can't reach them as they're also busy with the war. I'm looking forward to reading one of the Starfleet ships finding Babylon4&the Great Machine in Epsilon Eridani as well the Minbari Grey Council finding about it. Will Sinclair/Valen's body be there on Babylon4? Will Starfleet's DTI(Department of Temporal Investigations) pay Kirk another visit as technically this is all his fault again. Voyager's msg already warrants a visit from them especially the mention of a Vorlon Circle temporal paradox. The Soul Hunters should be running amok and finding more about the Vulcans&their Katra practices&rituals.
| MalSer chapter 1 . 9/11/2020
I am SO glad to see a continuation of ATV! Love this storyline and thoroughly looking forward to seeing it evolve further. Thanks!
| Son Kenshin chapter 1 . 9/11/2020
Ohhh nice first chapter to the sequel! The Minbari really are too dogmatic to think of anything what Kirk was trying to say...