SkySage24 you surprised me! I knew that more intelligently-bent stories, TV shows and movie are in vogue today... But damn! You really really caught me between the eyes!... Cold Rationality in movies and the like and Hot Tense Drama in movies and the like are two opposite things. Yet here you are flawlessly, seamlessly interwove the the polar opposites into a very immersive scene... Most outstanding indeed! Keep it up!

Omg lucky af timing to come on to check if it was updated. Only 2 hours ago. Big excited

Honestly, I why known this would be boring for all most everyone else. I would love to read a full blown discussion between the Emperor and Isha about their own views on what they are, and how they should act.

Your portrayal of the emperor makes him come across as an asshole, a rational and logical one sure but still an asshole. Which is better then what I see him as in canon which is simply an asshole with little logic, tact, decorum, logic, or thought.

Your also marking me feel sorry for Isha. ... ... ... I’m almost waiting for the makeup sex between her and Emperor grumpy pants...

I think what you described him as fits him perfectly. The Emperor of Mankind loves humanity as a whole but does not care one iota about you and your personal goals, he is well meaning and desires the good of the many, but would without question sacrifice 50% of humanity if it meant that the other 50% ascended to a higher form of existence.

Nice chapter can’t wait for more.

as a muslim, i had problem with this fan omake chapter you canonized into this fic. the fic is about ishathe emperor's quest to ensure the survival of their races and their galaxy.

but then this chapter about an ex-muslim's pov on the emperor's unintentional influence that make humanity worships him is upsetting for me. because its too close to reality. real world religions' involvement in many science fiction fic are often glossed over or simplified into the background to ensure little conflict with religious readers.

imagine if you canonize more interlude chapters about ex-christian, ex-jews, ex-hindu, ex-buddhistother real world religions into this fic, which i'm sure would upset other religious readers of their respective religions.

sorry... this interlude's touching too close to real world religions. so i implore you to decanonize this interlude chapter. please consider some more relevant story to be used as interlude chapter. maybe a perspective from a thunder warrior that feels disowned by the emperor, or a tech priest since isha is implied to have powers over technology or similar things like that so far...

because this fic is really good. aside from this fanmade interlude chapter that you canonize for some reason despite it contents' potential to upset religious readers.

I love this story, a pity that there is no pairing between those 2 but I suppose it is reasonable (I imagine that the closest thing that could be obtained would be friends or colleagues), but what excites me most will be the interactions with the primarchs since She could help with the problems that led several of them to chaos (maybe she can also be the mother figure they didn't have)

Way to go SkySage24... First of all, it was really swell of you to continue where Ashynarr left off. And next, those last 3 chapters that you added? Stroke of Genius. Really I damn well mean it

iIf there would be something about a proto-primarch called "The Angel" Isha could fix him. The angel was the most powerful weapon the emperor created

Your doing a really good job! I look forward to reading more of this:)

YES

Morai-Heg does exist in 40k but the only thing we know about her is that she was Khaine’s spouse and that she gave khaine the howling banshees as a gift. Her fingers were also turned into the crone swords. But while it never directly states her domain (as far as I’m aware) it isn’t without precedence for her to have the same domain as in fantasy.

I’m loving this story so much. I think Isha is the adoptive mother humanity needs at this point.

If the Emperor is the father, then maybe he can brand her as Gaia, the mother.

This is some much better than Isha being Nurgle’s Petri dish for experimentation.