Reviews for Everqueen
Voraces Lector chapter 93 . 8/6
I can accept that in this AU female enhanced exists due to Ishas influence', but I believe there is a debatable point that canonically the Emperor intended his best armies to be mono-gendered/sexed. Leave no room for Slaanesh.
Sheploo chapter 93 . 8/6
Dude, FSM DO NOT exist.
TOPCAT-59 chapter 93 . 8/6
it’s good seeing the thunder warriors being used to train the next generation of space Marines, instead of being killed off like in cannon.
Wakiyamani chapter 93 . 8/6
I know people will get the beaks bent out of shape because Alyssa is being prepped to be a Space Mahreen, and she's a she... but to be fair, the limitations of the gene-modding necessary to transform only 'men' into Spece Marines could easily be overcome by Isha's knowledge and power.

Truly I'm one that's annoyed by the ret-conning necessary to change the Custodes into a co-ed force, and I think it takes away from sheer badassitude of the Adepta Sororitas when you make female space marines, after all the Sisters of Battle don't HAVE all the tech augmentations and are every bit the equal fighting force as the firstborn space marines. But this is 'Fan FICTION' liberties are to be expected.
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 93 . 8/6
Why do I feel a paddling coming from mom
Darth Kyuubi Bugge chapter 93 . 8/6
Great chapter
merendinoemiliano chapter 93 . 8/6
Very well done chapter, altrough I hoped in some mention of psychic training
The Common Gent chapter 92 . 8/3
If you want to spice it up at some point add in Trazyin he is less prideful than most of his peers plus he would ally with Isha and the Enps if choas truly fights back, it's been shown before when Cadia was about to fall. He would never side with chaos due to him not gaining anything new for his collection, they also hinder the grow of his gallery due to chaos love of wrecking things.
evilstatistic19 chapter 92 . 8/1
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
Fumanse chapter 44 . 7/30
The Emperor read the Prince, it seems.
Guest chapter 90 . 7/26
Ouch, taking advantage of her fear and panic like that, looks like he's still got a ways to go. At least having his eyes opened to the Throne seems to have made an impression. Now he just really needs to make the connection that if he's not careful with his methods, Humanity's survival and dominance aren't going to include the salvation he had in mind.
Stoned Koala chapter 92 . 7/27
While the Emperor was not entirely killed in the Heresy, nor could he be reborn. In that state in-between, could 10,000 years of belief, billions of sacrificed psykers, have reshaped what he was?
BrightSkywalker chapter 92 . 7/27
Wonderful
Switch900v chapter 92 . 7/27
Not a bad chapter. But I'm still waiting for the Emperor and Isha to go in search of the primarchs
Imperial warlord chapter 92 . 7/26
Awesome chapter.
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