The way you described the votan kinda reminds of the necron in a way, powerful but are hampered by their own internal problems

tftc great job

The Ork’s are on the book of grudges, so I feel like they will be more willing to fight against.

Very elegant and enjoyable. Best of luck with next chapters, curious about your use of the League

Jesus, Isha and George just can't catch a break. They aren't even done with one problem before another two starts knocking at their door lmao

Something tells me this is going to go sideways, between bringing Horus along and whatever Fo might be up to with the hypno-indoctrination. Not to mention throwing Eldar into the mix as well. Isha and George are gonna have their hands full keeping everyone in line I think, like parents having to wrangle bickering step-siblings

Fingers crossed Horus and Isha can bond a bit in the upcoming campaign, and his views on the Eldar won't be too negative. She needs the Primarchs supporting her to help sway their dad on future issues.

IshaThunder Warriors and Eldar
GeorgeSpace Marines and Humanity

What a civil war this will be ahhahaahhaahahahahaha also that some Primarchs will love her and even die for her especially Angron which would fit with the thunder warriors

Awesome chapter.

Happy birthday to this story, and thanks again for all the great work you've put into it!

Excellent dialouges as usual, curious to see Horus' first mission.

Noice now where is that sabton song

I’m concerned about Malcador…

A good chapter, but... were marine chapters a thing back then? I thought they came in existence after the heresy.

tftc

A small bit of tension within the growing Asuryani people. Might lead to some fun later down the line when she reconnects with Aledari across the galaxy who adhere to the Cult of Vauls tenants.