Reviews for Onyx Rain
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
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Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
You didn't bash anyone? From my side it sounds very much like you're bashing Naruto an dGaara, since it was Naruto that changed Gaara, not your fake character. Naruto was the one that beat Gaara when the sand attacked the village and they became good friends! So Naruto would never hunt him down either! This one sucks!
Guest chapter 14 . 7/18/2012
Gaara and Naruto and Kakashi I can understand people liking, but Sasuke is so damn obnoxious! It's Naruto who saved the village from Gaara and it's Naruto that Gaara befriends and respects. But other than that, good story. I hate Sakura though. Wish she didn't have a part! She's so annoying.
ChibiMa chapter 5 . 2/5/2006
ChibiMa chapter 4 . 2/5/2006
the chapter title fits
ChibiMa chapter 3 . 2/5/2006
ChibiMa chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
cant say much since it's the first chapter
Shiay chapter 16 . 11/13/2005
This fic is probably one of the most well-written I've ever seen. I loved the ending, it was sad yet hopeful. It's going under my favorite stories.
Reject From The Back Of The Bus chapter 16 . 8/27/2005
This was an AWESOME story!

It's sad that Gaara died, though...

ethereal damsel chapter 8 . 6/5/2005
Maizul is a really cool character. Was the "void" her technique? Guess I'll have to find out...
ethereal damsel chapter 4 . 6/4/2005
This is a really vibrant piece of writing. You make the desert seem almost beautiful in a way I never imagined before. I love the way you describe things so well.

Thank you so much for reviewing my fic and actually critiquing it! I get few where people tell me what I'm doing wrong, which are really the ones that help, especially since Catalyst is the first fic I've ever written. If you decide to continue reading it, you'll see that I do mention Kaya's parents in later chapters; many times in fact. My latest chapter is almost entirely flashbacks about them.
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 11 . 12/18/2004

*wants to draw Gaara, soaked, and standing in the rain*

Yay for the prettiness of this chapter... and the return of Gaara's dream...
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 10 . 12/18/2004
Crypticness... who sent Maizul, and what are her "specialties"? You've created a very nice OC in here, with a complete background and solid personality. You should be proud Ling! _
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 9 . 12/18/2004
*wonders how much longer as well*

But they can't die! (or this fanfic will end unpleasantly)

Must see how this shall turn out!
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 8 . 12/18/2004
_ Maizul! Pretty name... and Gaara's being a little bit talkative... wow...

*goes on to the next chapter*

(Apologies for these reviews... I know they don't really help, but I am enjoying the story, and I'm just in a reviewing mood. _;)
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