I'm going to cry they missed by literally seconds

I have been listening to S.E.P. fanfiction's reading of this on Spotify. We are around chapter 17 of publication when I am reviewing this. Absolutely beautiful. The realities of dementia are so very important to address as all humans are dying one of three ways, cancer, heart death, or brain death. And as we learn to extend our hearts and cure cancers we are seeing more and more brain issues (i work in a nursing home). You are doing a phenomenal accuracy to the disease. And although at this point (chapter 18) the writing on the wall with narcissa and the friend's meddling is blatant it's no so laid out we feel cheated which is a delicate balance many miss in this field. Well done and I look forward to finishing it.

i'm not crying *sniffs* i'm not!

To simply say this was well crafted, perfectly articulated, and intimately devastating would be such a menace to such a beautifully crafted piece of literature. Thank you.

I am at a loss for words. With each chapter I am even pulled even deeper into this magnificent world you've tapped into. There is so much depth to all of them that I would have never even conceived. I don't even have words for your words! BRAVO! Only half way through and it's so easily the best fic I've ever read. I've never loved someone's interpretation of Scorpius more.

this was amazing...thank you so much for writing this

this was so f*cking good. I'm envious of your ability to write, and thank you for sharing. the stories that make you FEEL do so by using details and build-up and establishing relationships and this story does that. never bored, very invested especially in scorp and I don't often even like when fan fics have kids! it doesn't take away from the dramione and your fictional child stole my heart. bravo.

The best story so far. I’m hooked till the end. Feeling accomplished when reading through the development of each character.

AMAZING! So amazing! Best fanfic I’ve read yet! Thoughtful! Slow burn! Perfection! Thank you thank you thank you for writing and sharing your creative genius! Thank you for being you and WOW was this incredible! I read it everyday over a month and it’s been a light in my life and something I look forward to! The albus-Draco HILARITY and Draco’s annoyance of Albus literally had me laughing out loud. Draco and Hermione’s authentic relationship and development was incredible and so accurate! Her denial, confusion, emotional turbulence, their gravity to one another, Draco’s pursuit, his decision, HIS COMPETENCY! I didn’t even know I’m wanting that from a partner myself but your story largely makes me realize wow I just want a competent partner; the attention to detail and intentionality of a MAN! Ugh so incredible reading and feeling joy, sadness, amusement, fear, love, and light all throughout your book! Amazing politics and plot; incredible accurate inclusivity of characters and their development! Love love love! Curious what house albus was sorted into your fanfic and what house Scorp was sorted into during your fanfic?! Thank you again for your BRILLIANT story and writing and authorship!

words i know cannot express how monumental this work is. wow, just wow.

Draco, my absolute favourite here, he is just perfect. such an impressive, complex character, that actually develops and changes. and changes not in a forced and rushed, over the night way. i actually was so impressed by his persona, he is caring, supporting, highly intelligent and skilled, has good manners, and organisational skills, is understanding, strong, independent, reliable, stable, honest, has the forethought to secure everybody's safety (protection measures, potions, wards, plans, politics etc), and happinness to some extent, too (notes for Scorpius, planning ahead with gifts etc, he did whatever he could and then some to help Hermione, his mother, and then even Potter, not to mention Scorpius. he shines in small acts of kindness, has some humor as well. could he be more adorable with Albus?! what spoke volumes to me and resonated a lot was how much weight he was carring and did not waver. the problems kept adding up but he kept the composure. was rock solid, which is so impressive. i also liked how he gave Hermione space and let her decide what she wanted and the way she wanted it. because he knew what he wanted and would not settle for less. also very appealing was his approach to politics.
I mean, overall he is absolutely amazing, i adore him so much.

the plot was well thought and laid. the characters were interesting and engaging and unique. each and every one was distinct and colorful.
the way you write is clear and precise. you have so many observations about life, love, politics, justice and what not thrown into the plot.

what i want to say is, this is another oddysey. thank you for writing this epic journey. and thank you for completing it and bringing us for the ride with you.

chapeau bas

oh sht, the reason why draco hasnt given back the cactus is soooo fcking heartwarming. idk why but i keep on crying as i read through your work! its amazing!

Good Lord, the way you wrote Scorpius and his love for that cactus, my heart is gonna explode! When i got to the part that he was sleeping outside Draco's office, i bawled my eyes out. i feel so bad for this little boy. i just want to hug him if i can.

What a journey! Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it so much. I especially love the truths about life, anxiety, etc. that Hermione speaks of throughout the story.

i forgot to comment. i've been in a daze for two days simply reading and feeling and living a life that isn't mine.
your story moves me deeply and I want to thank you for writing it. ironically enough, i feel seen by your characterisation of hermionein a way i've come to realise people are rarely able to .
you have a talent and I'm very f-ing glad and grateful you chose to share it with the world

Wow that was an amazing story. I enjoyed the way you told this story. I loved every minute of it. You had me hook from the start. I'm glad I came across this story. I loved the characters the way you didn't let a character go uncheck. That was my favorite part, and you even had Hermione being checked. I have read stories were even if Hermione was in the wrong they always have Draco apologizing. Thank you for sharing your writing.