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I love it, he put her to sleep with a math lesson. Granted, I've slept in math class the most(which is to say maybe 3 times) but still hilarious.

It's a bunch of formatting.

Well this story came out of nowhere. Was wondering how I could have missed something over 60 chapters long and saw it was barely a day old. Saw there was no reviews for it yet and decided I should fix that.

I'd like to say that since I just binge read all 63 chapters so far, I think you've done well enough to hold my attention. The characters and setting all seem pretty spot on to me, and you've done well with the lead OC's interactions with them. The fact that Lin Yie was basically isekai'd into a game world he's only vaguely familiar with, offers you more freedom when introducing people and places not just to him but to readers as well. Would like to see more on how the story develops on that end of his otherworldly origins, such as his former occupation as a 'Grifon Commander' revealing his taste in mobile games (though I should mention it looks like that chapter was actually posted twice in a row for some reason).

Perhaps Lin could seek Operator training to deal with both his powerlessness in dangerous situations, and making money to combat his persistent financial woes? I imagine the reason everyone else seems so rich to him is that regularly risking life and limb pays big bucks. It could also serve to further involve him in the game's main events, though whether or not things will continue to occur that way seems questionable. Chernobog may be suffering plenty of unrest, but it hasn't yet been left ruined by a Catastrophe, and while W and a few recognizable enemy types have just made an appearance, the Reunion movement itself hasn't once been mentioned by name yet throughout the whole story, though that may now change soon.

In any case these are just my thoughts on the matter. Wouldn't mind seeing this story continue, Arknights could do with more love and attention to it. Good luck to you.

Okay, not gonna lie, i binge-read this entire thing today from chapter 1 to 63, gotta say it's pretty damn good all thing considered. I see that you say there will be a rewrite, which seems like it would be nice, there aren't tons of spelling mistakes but they are there, and forgive me for saying this but I assume English might not be your first *written* language. But I digress, I love this, it's the best i've read in a while and it really helps the mind flourish when thinking of arknights.

Keep up the amazing work!

I must say i've been reading this rather intently so far, but I realized that chapters 20 and 21 are the same, and i'm not sure if 22 is a direct continuation after Orchid hypnotized him, as in going from him cracking and speaking to her straight to him and ansel in 22, or if there's a whole chapter missing. I'm only bringing this up because, well, so far I really like this story and i'm genuinely curious.

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