Reviews for Road to Power
bdydvl chapter 23 . 1/10
It better help with more than transportation when apparition, portkeys and slip rings exist already
bdydvl chapter 21 . 1/10
How tf did voldy's diary end up in that woman's hand btw? Lucius saw mc and thought of getting rid of it ? Doesn't make sense unless it's an AU part where he never gave it to lucius for some reason
bdydvl chapter 19 . 1/10
That's there's no camera and no listening devices in their cells is so fcking stupid... Mc is a moron too
.. mc's instinct to want to protect laura is stupid, it doesn't work at all with his character
Dumbledore is taking his sweet time too, btw can't mc think of Fawkes or Dumbledore to attract him? Or was that just some bullshit he fed harry and everything in the end of the second book was planned ? Because i don't believe hydra can stop a phoenix
bdydvl chapter 18 . 1/10
He better think that his room is bugged and not say stupid shit
Btw just in case he's in England he should use a single wandless spell to trigger the impropre use of magic act
bdydvl chapter 16 . 1/10
Ewwww i don't like Voldemort's horcruxes taking over, i guess he'll be more intelligent and less of a Maniac when he recover most of his soul
bdydvl chapter 15 . 1/10
...all of this to kidnap muggleborns? It's probably just used to give him enhancement and for him to destroy them later but it's still stupid
bdydvl chapter 14 . 1/10
Maybe Voldemort's Shade found out the stone wasn't there and changed his plan after that.. he should have minded his business
bdydvl chapter 13 . 1/10
Would the cleansing ritual work on horcruxes ? Or would that make the objects useless anyway and mc better use basilisk venom?

Why is he surprised? She can see futures, from the moment he started to want to learn the Mystic arts i was waiting for her to come since he isn't ordinary
bdydvl chapter 11 . 1/10
So if mc isn't stupid he just became rich af, possibly immortal (in case it only stops aging he shouldn't use it before a decade or two), and it probably has a few other use in alchemy
bdydvl chapter 10 . 1/10
Since he want the stone how the hell is he going to take it from the mirror?
bdydvl chapter 9 . 1/10
Is he in a rush? Why would he trust Salazar with something so important? And he shouldn't fight the magic? Lmao it would have been good if it was a Trap to take over his body, moron

Salazar said the ingredients are easy to find? Is he delusional or a troll?

He found an abandonned potion kit? With usable things inside? Did he visit the come and go room already or is it just bullshit ?
Snape had some tears of Fawkes that aren't always with him ? And they were stolen by a first year? Yeah lmaooo sure

Btw how the fck did the other descendant of Salazar find this ingredient ? Does the potion master of Hogwarts always has them somehow and is shit at guarding it ?
bdydvl chapter 8 . 1/10
Instead of saying he had an eidetic memory from birth and/or could use occlumency, he went with the whole truth ? Wtf is wrong with him
bdydvl chapter 6 . 1/10
Will the map show his real name?
Moaning myrtle will definitively cause a scene if she sees him
Will Voldemort recognize him ?or does he need to see him for that? Does he get access to his host's memories ?
bdydvl chapter 4 . 1/10
Shouldn't mc be named a black too? And is he higher than draco in the inheritance line after Sirius ?
Guest chapter 32 . 1/6
I hope you will get back to finishing this one. It's great! Maybe give him something like kunai from Naruto. With his inhuman powers, he could be the next Yellow Flash or a teleporting version of Hela from Thor. His portals could also make him like Blink from the Xmen or abusing the Portal gun physics system from the Portal games - maybe even combined with powers from the Braid game too...
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