Reviews for Welcome, Hero of Chaldea |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus christ, this story is just happening way too fast. The pacing has no stop even when the Singularity is finished and Shirou and the others return to Chaldea. When not fighting, it's just plain infodump after infodump with the characters just accepting everything and even when their are questions, it's answered and that's it. It feel's like a Let's Play of FGO with the player just skipping everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...huh. So it seems like Jeanne and Jalter are sharing the same body? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to see more Chapters of this soon. Though I might ask of what would you think of a FGO x RWBY Crossover? I've seen Multiple times of Chaldea popping into Remnant, but I'd rather see something in Reverse, specifically, RWBY Characters being summoned into Chaldea as Servants. I imagine Ruby Rose being a Rider, Lancer or Archer Class Servant, Weiss Schnee being a Rider, Saber or Caster Class Servant, Blake Belladonna being an Assassin Class Servant, Yang Xiao Long only being a Berserker Class Servant, Jaune Arc being a Saber Class Servant, Nora Valkyrie being a Berserker Class Servant, Pyrrha Nikos being a Lancer, Saber, or Archer Class Servant, Ren Lie being an Assassin Class Servant, Glynda Goodwhich being a Caster Class Servant, Ozma aka Ozpin being a Ruler Class Servant, and so on. It's only a suggestion cause I haven't seen this form of Crossover, aka Chaldea Summoning Other People from other Series like Naruto Uzumaki, Ichigo Kurosaki, and such, as Servants. |
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![]() ![]() I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released and how things will get resolved between Shirou and Mash. Shirou is probably drawing parallel between her and Sakura. Also it seems that they arrived before Jaune alter started going on a frenzy and manipulated into seeking the destruction of France by Gilles De Raise. |
![]() ![]() I heard they just released the English dubbed of Fate Strange Fake on Crunchyroll website. I am loving this story by the way and hope to see another chapter soon. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Looking forward to future updates :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoy the dynamics this Shirou has with everyone, Mash is usually your biggest fan in these stories so it's nice to see something different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love reading this story and cannot wait until the next update! So Shirou and crew learn the real name of "Marie" I wonder how that is going to play out. Also it would seem like you made this Jeanne d'Arc a mix between her regular self and Alter self in terms of personalities given she is prone to violent temperaments but then immediately recoils in on herself. I like that. It's a refreshing take on her character. I digress, excellent work and looking forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A little fast paced but enjoyable |
![]() ![]() I'd guess that Rin is pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting so far... I wonder if that is Jalter or the normal version. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Needed to give it a reread as it's been a while and it still holds up lovely. And Jeane is confirmed and... she's wearing black. How did I not notice this before? Curious. |