| Reviews for The Victory Lap |
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   Saftey Orks wif Steam zilla chapter 4 . 12/10/2024 Damn still no new chapter |
| Daybreaker1 chapter 4 . 7/17/2024 Naofumi here is just using gaslighting, Gish gallop tactics, and whataboutism to distract from the fact that he's practicing child slavery. Motoyasu is entirely right to point out that it's still unacceptable whatever the local laws might say. Raphtalia saying she's happy as a slave is irrelevant, she's a child and should not be allowed to make such life-altering choices. |
| lucas482020842082 chapter 4 . 7/6/2024 cap 4 |
| Wyszard chapter 4 . 3/24/2024 Love the story! Can’t wait fir more if you’re still writing it! |
| Telpon chapter 4 . 3/7/2024 Hey man! I found the story so far really good. I know that it's hard sometimes, but I found your story as one of the best ones. It is well written, has good pacing and is the only TROTSH with Time Travel (which I love) I hope you feel better soon and get out of your funk. :D |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2023 If you could update that would be awesome! |
| Logical-Tadkins chapter 4 . 7/1/2023 This is such an awesome story and I love how you crafted the events that have happened with Naofumi. It'll be interesting to see how things change with his prior knowledge being what it is. Especially loving the Raphtalia moments as well. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2023 AHHHH SO CUTE! absolutely adore this lmao the peek into Myne’s mind, girl trying so hard to frame him |
| Dasgun chapter 1 . 4/22/2023 о |
| Queen cat spark chapter 4 . 3/31/2023 The story was quite fun to read and the idea was cool. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2023 REVIEW MY STORIES! www dot fanfiction dot net/u/15367020/DefunctStoreKing REVIEW MY STORIES! www dot fanfiction dot net/u/15367020/DefunctStoreKing , REVIEW MY STORIES! www dot fanfiction dot net/u/15367020/DefunctStoreKing REVIEW MY STORIES! www dot fanfiction dot net/u/15367020/DefunctStoreKing — |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2023 Great story can't wait for chapter 5! |
| teamo12peri chapter 1 . 1/19/2023 Not bad this is entertaining to watch trash get dunked on |
| ramiro.rodriguezrodriguez92 chapter 1 . 12/19/2022 Esta muy buena la historia, espero que sigas actualizandola, tienes potencial como escritor. |
| TsukuyoGintoki chapter 4 . 12/7/2022 this is so good! I hope you continue this story. |