Reviews for The Chosen
Guest chapter 2 . 10/13
OMG this is amazing, please update soon i really want to read more about Bonnie and the Mikaelsons
lee chapter 2 . 10/11
There's only two chapters so far, but please know that I've re-read this like five times already
Joanie's daughter chapter 2 . 10/1
Liking this so far!
I wonder what's going on with Bonnie. Did it have some thing to do with the necklace that Bonnie touched?
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/26
Sooo good
Alexis chapter 2 . 9/26
Very curious to see where you take this!
Rose chapter 2 . 9/26
When Caroline said "our Bonnie" I'm pretty sure she meant "her Bonnie" lol this is the best. I can't wait for more.
Ok ko Lets chapter 2 . 9/25
I’m loving this even more and more
ZombieSavior chapter 2 . 9/27
I love the girls all being friendly with each other and actually acting like friends. I feel something has been awoken in Bonnie or touching that necklace at the ball did something to her. This story is very interesting and I can’t wait for more Bonnie and Rebekah scenes.
JenJen1234 chapter 1 . 9/27
GIRL I already like this more than the show !
ZombieSavior chapter 1 . 9/27
I love it. What a great start, so much happened in a single chapter. I. Very excited for more.
Akoth chapter 1 . 9/26
Interesting story and I can see there is promising writing. Only thing I can offer criticism on is the use of the same words over and over. Characters repeating gestures in the same scene. Bonnie sighs, someone sighs, Bonnie sighs again. Bonnie squints then everyone at some point in the scene will squint as well. Roll of the eyes, makes it hard to read.
jayroy chapter 2 . 9/26
I really like this! Vaguely remember reading this in the past but it didn’t get updated, hopefully you keep this going since it’s good:)
Bobby chapter 1 . 9/23
Ohhh I love this
Bennettore chapter 2 . 9/25
See some jealousy coming from miss Elena in the future. Bonnie’s getting all that yummy attention Is bound to shake some egos. Looking forward to reading more. Kudos
Bennettore chapter 1 . 9/24
Bonnie deserve all the love. All her love interests were given to the other two girls in vampire diaries, so predictable from that racist plec woman. Oh well thanks to fan fiction writers that are the absolute best, we can read some good Bonnie centric stories. Kudos
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