Reviews for To Coda
Remus98 chapter 55 . 7/21/2021
We’re chug chug chugging along.

Velcra: remember the long spiel I went on about Velcra giving Ilaria a nickname and how mad it made me? I hope you don’t, now that I’ve learned that Ria is another person :skull: Anyway, moving on. I wonder what this ‘research’ is really about, but I sense it playing into the subplot in ways I have yet to uncover. That peacekeeper better kick her ass.

Ambrose: the operation went well! Though it was nice to hear about it in Oksana’s POV last chapter, it was a relief actually seeing Ambrose wake up from it. I’m enjoying the attitude he has towards it right now, being willing to wait for the time it needs to take and whatnot. “Whether he can sing or not, another song will be written regardless.” CHILLS!

Milo: brave and stupid is a valid combo I guess. Maybe it’s things Micah should start pulling on again though, and get to stepping, because something needs to happen in this relationship ASAP. You’ve been beating around the bush for long enough guys. The tension has been there for ages, do something about it. Kiss, fight, hug - just something! Please!

Casimira: oh no, not the tapes. It doesn’t necessarily surprise me that she watched them, but that doesn’t make it a good idea. I guess it could be therapeutic in a sense, she’s valid for wanting to see what her family said about her, but it hurts. So much. Tella’s presence definitely softened the blow a bit, as did her kisses. Hopefully it will help her move on.

Penelope: omg subplot! I said that sneaking out wasn’t a good idea, and whilst I stand by that in regards to Penny and Lisse, I as the reader was very intrigued by this shadow. Someone who knew what they were doing, huh? Is it the bomber coming back to the scene of their crime? I’m very interested to learn who did it, and why. What’s their agenda?

Slowly making my way to the end!
Josephm611 chapter 65 . 7/20/2021
omg last epilogue and it's ALL THE KIDS AHHHHHH i'll give each one one sentence to limit the length of this review bc i don't ahve the patience and if i tried to do all of them i might be grumpy at the end

seeing oksana finally settle into her own life and be happy with it makes me happy beyond compare.
AWWWW YES ambrose with his siblings is so accurate and i love them.
donatella's moving on!
I'm so proud of Milo for learning to let go and that makes the reunion all the more satisfying.
Ok i lied last time we saw Velcra, I'm happy to see her here.
YAY mAZZEN IS FREE FROM VELCRA
AHAHAHA DEVAN BACK AT IT AGAIN
OMG HAHAHAH VARRIK DOING A PUZZLE AND THEN GOING HOME YESSSSS
YEAH INARA GET 'EM I LOVE THIS going back for their sentimental stuff she's such a good mom
AWWWWW Rex is gonna live with Shoah and i'm so stupidly happy for him
yay for ilaria, isn't cal such a good brother figure?
and OMG cal moved in yessssss i love this, i'm so glad it happened, he deserves happiness
i love lex getting emotional, she's growing and getting better and it makes me happy
gosh veles is still terrible and the way he treats iva makes me angry
omg penny getting lisse to give her a haircut is the funniest thing i've seen in a while
OMG MICAH'S HOME AHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHH AHHHHHH AND REUNITED WITH FAMILY AHHHH
mari's life is so idyllic and calm and normal now, and I really do love it, she's grown up
AWWWW REN IS GOING TO MARI'S WEDDING THIS IS SO SWEET
lisse and penny are sticking together that's so adorable!
of COURSE hosea would go cold turkey because he wouldn't do it any other way, but I'm so proud of him for making it. funny how hosea tried to save galvin's life at some point and now galvin is saving his
ofc casi isn't over things because she isn't that type but i'm hopeful she'll get there someday
HALE AND ARLEY OUT ON A WALK YESSSSSS
AWWWWWWW licia letting herself be cared for AWWWW
OMG ORIOL DID IT HE DID IT I'M SO PROUD OF YOU ORIOLLLL

omg there's part two. i won't comment on these because... heck i'll comment on the ones i want to. sorry to everyone else.
mazzen's making friends!
OMG LISSE AND PENNY AND MARI ARE REUNITED
AHHH AWWWW CAL CALLS LICIA
OMG REX'S NEW LIFE AWWWWWW
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG AHHHHH EWOEBGWE OGBIEWLUBG IEWUGBIEWU IUWEBF UBWEUB IUWEB GUWEIUGWEUIGIUWEGUWEIUGWERGBWEIUFBWEUIF UIEW UIE FUIWE FIUWEBUIFB BIWEBVIUWEUIBUIEW BGUIBWEFUIEBWUIFBUIWEBFIUWBEUIFBWEUIFBEUFIBWEIUFB EWUIBFIU EWBFI OKSANA AND AMBROSE /ARE/ A THING AND HE BOUGHT HER FLOWERS AND I WANNA SCREAM I'M OBSESSED WITH THEM AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEFE FWEOIFGBWEOIOIWREGWEHIGOWEROIBOIWEIOGWEBUIGBWEOUIGWEUIOGVEWGOUEWGWEGYWEOHUIWEGIUEWBGIEWVGIUBWEIUGWEBIUGWEBUIFBWEIFUEWUIFHWEIUFBWEOIUE YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
PENNY AND LISSE ARE GOING TO MARI'S WEDDING THIS IS TOO CUTE
AND YESSS ORIOL i can just /feel/ the improvement emanating from this pov i adore it
OMG LICIA MOVING TO SIX WITH CAL I LOVE THIS AHAP EIO EWGIOEW
aiyah veles you suck
wth this was gorgeous. lex back on the lake, just like her intro, but she's a completely different perso now. i love it.
OMG MARI'S WEDDING THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE AWWWWWWWWWW
AND REN AWWWWWWWWWWWWW I have to keep from screaming bc it's midnight here but AWWWWWW
OMG DEVAN VISITING VARRIK I LOVE THEM
awwww apartment shopping! normal life! these kids deserve normal life.
AWWWWW look at Hosea being a good boy! he's such a good boy!
OMG VARRIK AND LEX AND THEY HUG AWWWWWW
i never thought velcra would have such a nice ending but i'm glad to see it
Awww CASI YOU'RE GETTING OVER THE PTSD YESSSSS GIRL
i like seeing hale around people. he might not like it, but it's good for it.
micah's visiting two!
inara and her kids!
YESSSSS AMBROSE IS PERFORMING AGAIN AND IT'S THE SONG HE WROTE WITH HIS SIBLINGS AND OKSANA IS THERE IN THE CROWD THIS IS SO SWEET I LOVE AMBROSE OKAY?
AND HAPPY MILO IS COMING BACK
AWWWWW ILARIA'S VISITING FOUR AGAIN THIS IS SO NICE

FERROX YES HE'S ALIVE
AND THAT ENDING.
I'M EMOTIONAL.
END.

I'm suddenly hit by a wave of emotion. I didn't I'd get so emotional. It's past midnight and I should've gone to bed two hours ago. But I'm emotional. We've finally reached Coda, and I'm glad it's /now/ and not before. Sure, I loved the story before, but it was the post-death stuff that really got me attached. So attached.

I think Ambrose is my favorite right now. Funny, ain't it? I liked him well enough back in the games (and I was usually Team Ambrose whenever he got into anything), but the more I saw him, the more I loved him. It's undeniable that he and I are such different people... but at the same time, I feel like... I /connected/ with him at a deeper level than I did with any of the other kids. Don't get me wrong, I love Micah and Oksana and Ren and all the soft and nice kids, but they don't resonate with me the way he has? I'm a musician. If I ever lost the ability to play the piano, I think it'd crush me. I completely relate to the feeling of wanting something but being obligated or pressured to not go for that thing. Even in some of his insecurities... I just /feel/ when I read him.

that's enough of my ambrose adoration. i've joked so much about reaching coda and wanting it all to just end. maybe it was partially out of a selfish annoyance of watching my review queue grow because you update so fast. but honestly. I'm sad to say goodbye. this fic has been part of my life for so long now and. it's just. weird to say goodbye. I'll miss all of them. Maybe even Veles, if I'm feeling extra sentimental.

i have to end this review or else i'll ramble on forever. thank you momo. thank you so much for this experience.
Josephm611 chapter 64 . 7/20/2021
epilogue ! .!

cambria...
ferrox isn't dead! good for him! i should've known. if they could piece veles back together why not ferrox? I wish them the best.

kiero...
awwww he's gonna escort micah home! i'm so glad to see these little continuations of the chapters before. it's sweet.

pandora...
proud of you, mrs. president. you've done well. I wish you the best with panem.

seren...
i am lost but it is sweet :heart:

atlas...
i finally realized the last names. i'm still confused but less so this time.
AWWWWWWW I LOVE THIS. THE FAMILIAL BOND NEVER FAILS I LOVE
Josephm611 chapter 63 . 7/20/2021
LAST GOODBYE CHAPTER I"M DOING THIS

milo...
i like this growth for milo :pleading_face:. for the longest time he didn't need anyone. but then micah broke through to him and he started becoming possessive almost, which was growth of sorts but it wasn't a good place to end. and now he's gonna let micah go home. that makes me happy, because that tells me that milo's gotten better, and i like that very much.

oksana... GIRL
AWWWWW after all that worrying about going home for Ambrose... it makes me so happy to see Ambrose reunited with his family. I love family reunion scenes so much, but this one's got me tearing up in a whole new way. especially when Ambrose goes over to his parents? And just. It's not perfect, but it's /happening/. I think there are parts of Ambrose's background that I just really relate to even though my family is so crazy different from his. So when he's going through such an emotional moment... I'm feeling so emotional too. I'm literally about to cry. Idk if I will bc the tears don't /spill/ easy but I'm definitely having a moment. And just. Oksana being there to help him through it and reassure him is just so AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i need to reread this pov i can't move on yet
gosh. i might as well be crying. the tears aren't flowing but I got that chill, that heavy breathing, everything else. gosh. i. i. can't. i'm full on having a moment and i don't know what to say. i feel like i shouldn't stop typing bc then i'd be wasting time but oh my goodness momo what have you done to me. i love this pov so much. it's probably my favorite so far.

ren... awwww i've missed you
AWWWWWW he and mari are visiting ! it's so happy! i love them! they are my absolute sunshine and i adore it.

penny...
i keep rereading the end of her pov because i'm just confused. i can't tell what' any of this is referencing. ik writer's are supposed to trust their readers to figure out the unsaid but i cannot for the life of me figure this out oops.

inara...
oh my goodness she got moved to the victor's village ! I love that! it's so wholesome! and she's with her kids and i love to see it. i do like kids so this got me :pleading_face:

CAL...
YOU GET HIM CAL. YOU COULD BEAT HIM UP AND I'D ROOT FOR YOU THE WHOLE DARN WAY. I love cal so much. i adore him. i'd def rank him among my favorite kids in this entire story. i'm so glad they're not dead? cause otherwise i wouldn't have had nearly enough cal content :pleading_face:

lex... HI
ok this sister bond is everything and it's so nice and sweet and i love reading about it? i like seeing lex happy. i like seeing lex growing up and maturing and improving and feeling better. and i like her admitting that she does like varrik. this pov was so ridiculously satisfying i love it

velcra... Hi.
I guess this is as good of an ending as I could ever have hoped for with Velcra. I'm glad. I'm glad that Velcra's abilities will be funneled into good instead of evil. It's better than anything I'd ever imagined. Goodbye, Velcra. I won't miss you much.

also i love sappy a/ns i love you momo
Josephm611 chapter 62 . 7/20/2021
on to the next one! i think i can finish tonight!

micah...
LOL AHA micahhhhhhhhhh you've changed too and idk what to feel about it bc he's not just a good boy anymore? sneaking out of your room? that's. certainly. not the original micah we met. but this was a happy pov so i'm willing to forgive that.

ambrose... OMG THE D1S
ok they are so sweet and i love them and i want them to be happy for the rest of their lives because they deserve every good thing that has ever happened.

licia... been a hot sec!
woah. she's small, but she's strong. she's really strong. and as much as my heart always aches for reconciliation, i'm proud of licia for being strong enough.

rex... HAPPY ENDING FOR REX?
when i started tc, i never once thought rex would get a redemption or salvation arc, but I'm so glad you served us one because this is one of the most wholesome things ever. something about how terrible he used to be just makes this ending all the more satisfying. i make the :pleading_face: every time he mentions how Shoah really cares.

hosea... hiiii my boy
GOSH I'M SO PROUD OF YOU. MY BOY I'M SO RIDICULOUSLY PROUD OF YOU. He's always been able to justify his alcoholism, but I'm so proud of him for finally realizing what it's /really/ doing to him and try to get better. If anyone could break an addiction by sheer willpower, it'd be him. YEAH BOY. I'm very happy :pleading_face:

mazzen... HEYYYY long time no see!
omg he found closure. that last word. free. it gave me chills. this was so good. just. mazzen YEA I LOVE IT GOOD JOB I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU

varrik...
AWWWWW THE D4S TALKING. I DIDN"T KNOW I NEEDED THIS IN MY LIFE UNTIL NOW BUT OH HOW I NEEDED THIS. I LOVE THEM NOW TOO. THEY'RE BOTH SO DUMB SOMETIMES BUT GAH ARE THEY WHOLESOME IN THEIR OWN SPECIAL WAY

casi...
gosh the trauma is SAD in it's own way. there's so much left open ended with these two, there's no clear future ahead. but it feels right, after all they've been through. it's ok not to have a clear ending. it's ok. and it's nice.
Josephm611 chapter 61 . 7/20/2021
hmm i wonder if i can finish tc reviews today

tella...
LOL casi falling asleep that is too funny. this pov felt very atmospheric. like. nothing happened. but it's such a vibe. and just /existing/ in the space and seeing things happen even if the things aren't really anything.

hale... HALE I'VE MISSED YOU HIIII OMG OMG OMG
AWWWW Arley's getting better! this makes me very happy bc Hale is a good boy and deserves good things to happen to him. I love this new life for him.

devan... HIIIIIIIIIIII
i love this. devan gre on me so hard throughout this story? when it started off, her povs made my head hurt. but she's matured so much. she's still got a fun-loving, people-oriented streak, but she's got a different air now. as sad as it partially is... it also feels... right. i'm happy for her.

veles... i want you to grow but i'm not optimistic
welp i was right. he's. veles. since when does veles grow for the better. goodbye and good riddance.

mari... AWWWWW BB GIRL HIIII
awwwww she and roarke are so cute together. she's also grown so much? i didn't like her in her intro either. but a lot of those rougher edges have been smoothed off and i really enjoy her character nowadays

oriol... hiiiiii
i just feel so bad for him with his family and all. i understand why he's done all those things and... it's so sad. watching him struggle really makes me sad. but i'm rooting for him. someday. it'll happen.

ilaria... ms victor!
AWWWWW ok I love ilaria and cal too. their friendship makes me so soft and happy inside and i adore reading their interactions and i'm so excited for cal's little bit if only because i want more cal content. cal-tent? cal content.

lisse...
this was pretty sad for a mostly happy string of povs. :(. she's changed too. and. it's sad. i'm really curious where this plotline is going though.
Josephm611 chapter 60 . 7/19/2021
and here we are, onto the 60s. i'm going for coda, though i probably won't do the last chapter because you deserve a nice last review and my mood today won't allow for one

ferrox... answers? finally?
he's getting stuff done? uh oh.
oH. so. he blows up the bomb. uh oh. hmm.

milo... i assume this is micah/milo
oh dang that went all the way up fAST.
and oH.
the way i had to reread the last few paragraphs like five times before i realized that it was referencing the bomb going off. i legit thought it was talking about the sunrise the whole time. blame me for being a terrible reader. ig i'm just used to half-reading, half-skimming /everything/ so when i read something with a lot of small details, i miss most of them.
heck i just reread half the pov and did not recognize 90% of it. what is wrong with me today.
ok milo denying that he asked micah to stay is so funny because that's basically what he did. forget what he said - heck, i don't remember what milo said - but i legit thought he was lying to tella about not asking micah to stay because he was so obviously asking micah to stay?
but oh dear what's happening next

penny...
NOISe PLOT THINGS
oh gosh they're all going out that's a terrible idea. why can't they just be safe and stay in the building and stop trying to get themselves in trouble.
obv it's because the plot is better this way but i'm shaking my head at these kids.

velcra...
ok they didn't run out good.
ugh i do not like velcra. but this was so satisfying having everyone be mean to her.
now that i put it like that i feel bad

seren...
welp rip ferrox. i still dk what to think about what you did.
i just don't know anything

actually, i do know one thing. and it's that i'll stop reviewing before this terrible mood ruins the rest of the good reviews you deserve. so. bye?

wait. three chapters before the epilogues? so. this is the end of the main story? uh.

idk what to think man i'm out
Josephm611 chapter 59 . 7/19/2021
hiii i'm back maybe i'll get through 3-4 chapters today? we shall see. i will not liveblog bc i don't have sprntathon scaring me it will go faster for me to just leave a few thoughts at the end

alexa...
AWWWWW ok lex being cold for almost the entire way was so on-point and so on-brand for her, but that last bit with her sister was so unexpectedly /emotional/ for lex and i really love that. also she's in total denial about varrik too but ig we'll see if that goes anywhere

lisse... PLoT THINGS PLoT THINGS i'm ready to be done with the slice of life things i just want plot
welp not plot things. they're just discovering that micah didn't go. (and i know about micalo it was one of the few spoilers i accidenatally saw so there's no intrigue now... not that there would've been. it's. honestly not too surprising). lowkey i would've liked micah to go home tho.

donatella... plot thingss? please?
ok it's just donatella realizing that things are up between milo and micah. but the two of them have acted like a couple for so long i'm honestly surprised i didn't expect it to go this way. uhhhhh

sorry i'm in a funny (or rather, a very decidedly /not/ funny) mood today. if i knew what was good for everyone i would stop trying to review but now that i'm going i just kinda want to get things done. umm... sorry? sorry that you're getting reviews like this, not sorry that i'm cutting into my review queue that keeps me up at night

oksana... i should be happy to see her but i am feeling devoid of emotion today i'm sorry girl
is oksana and ambrose a ship? i feel like i ask that question every time it comes up because i feel like it is one but also no one talks about it so it makes me second-guess everything. if it is, it's still my favorite (even knowing about micah/milo coming soon... sorry.) i simply love the d1s very much. well, i know i love them, even if i can't feel it today.

cambria... oh hello. lowkey most of the capitol staff have blended together for me oops
OH PLOT THINGS I'M INTERESTED NOW
actually i'm just confused because i remember nothing about all their relationships and who thinks what and why she wouldn't call seren normally or what ferrox might be up to. i'm just. completely confused.
dyloccupy chapter 65 . 7/19/2021
i adore you and this verse xxx

obvi you know how i feel, especially since i was an ugly simp in your channel but! i can’t believe we have reached the end of this beautiful journey ;-;

tysm for all the laughs, gasps, smiles, and tears xoxo
Remus98 chapter 54 . 7/19/2021
Hi! Grattis på födelsedagen :)

Callister: the visual of him eating breakfast, attempting to crack jokes, is quite adorable. Emmi should appreciate his humor more, even if it’s not the funniest out there. Oh well, guess everyone can’t be hot *and* funny. I digress. It’s going to be interesting seeing the Sixes go back home, seeing as both of them have such a conflicted view of the district. Hm.

Varrik: not this emotional ass goodbye, why would you do me like this. And why would the capitol not send them home together. I mean, I get why, but still, it hurts my heart too much. Ugh. Devan better find that phone, and she better call every day to check in on Varrik. Although we know from later in the chapter that her leaving led to something else…

Lisse: her and Penny make for quite the duo. I like them together, I really do, but being smart about things are neither of their strong suits. They let their guts guide them a little bit too much at times, because going back to the train station is about the last thing they should be doing. Someone better stop them before this gets out of hand, and quickly!

Ren: this is about the cutest thing I’ve ever read - I didn’t want it to stop. Maren has my entire heart, which you know, and seeing them visiting Mari’s home back in Nine just made my heart go UwU. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. Ren calling Mari his best friend, the descriptions of Roarke, everything was just perfect and precious and all I ever wanted.

Alexa: oh, what do we have here. Perhaps all it took was for Varrik to stop trying, because the moment he did Lex came for a surprise visit. I’m happy that she’s working through her problems, and that she’s come to a place where she feels comfortable talking to him. What’s the worst thing that could happen, indeed. Very curious to eventually find out.

Only ten chapters left, oop!
Josephm611 chapter 58 . 7/17/2021
one more chapter before sprntathon ends let's go

rex...
AHHHH REX AND SHOAH BEING WHOLESOME TOGETHER I LIKE IT. SHE'S HIS SURROGATE PARENT BECAUSE HE'S NEVER HAD A REAL PARENT. AND HE"S NOT FEELING THE URGE TO KILL PEOPLE I LOVE IT. HE'S BECOMING UNPSYCHO. I HAVE LITERALLY NEVER SEEN THAT ARC BEFORE IN AN SYOT SO I'M MAJOR HYPED
OMG HE WANTS TO STAY. AND SHE LETS HIM STAY. THIS IS SO WHOLESOME I'M SO HAPPY I LOVE IT yES PLEASE I LOVE IT SO MUCH WHOLESOME REX I'M SO HERE FOR IT
WHY AM I HERE RANTING ABOUT REX. I NEVER THOUGHT THIS DAY WOULD COME BUT IT'S HERE I LVOE IT MOMO I LOVE YOU MOMO THANK YOU FOR THIS

varrik... more plot things? :eyes:
OH GOSH lex is leaving. i know it's good for her but it can't be good for varrik. she's a source of stability for his capricious nature.
this goodbye is so /lex/ but it's also wholesome in a subtle way and i'm here for it.
she's smiling.
his heart aches.

casi... PLOT THINGS
oh gosh the trauma of the arena THAT'S SO SAD. i forget that casi is older. tella just feels older for some reason.
ok maybe it's just them being wholesome but I'm ok with that too

micah... PLOT THINGS?
HE'S GOING HOME. AND SO IS OKSANA. AHHHHHH. ok this kinda hurts because we haven't heard from any of the kids that've gone home since they left and idk if i want to say goodbye to these two PRECIOUS KIDS
wait was it only micah
wait milo is here
oh gosh micah is staying isn't he. didn't i call it a few chapters back.
aiyahhhh

my reviews are getting shorter i'm running out of things to say

ATLAS WHO ARE YOU ARE YOU EVIL

altas...
is he evil? so he's rich? bruh i just have questions. i fear he's evil. at least his mother and sister aren't. but him uh oh... i'm getting evil vibes but maybe i'm just paranoid.
but eavesdropping.
bruh momo why did you just introduce this character and tell us so much and so little at the exact same time. it's frustrating, you know? i would like to know what's happening, thank you.

but for now i'm all out of words so i'll leave it. i've hit review fatigue and it's probably best if i don't say anything more lol

only seven more chapters left! that's... two more review sessions! hopefully i'll be caught up soon.
Josephm611 chapter 57 . 7/17/2021
OMG PENNY FIRST POV IT'S PLOT THINGS YESSSSSS I LOVE THIS

penny...
oh gosh they're ALL sneaking out? penny and lisse was one thing. now MICAH AND MILO AND TELLA AND CASI WHY. THIS IS GOING TO BE SUCH A DISASTER.
gosh couldn't they have just told vance. *sigh* i suppose this /is/ and story and it /is/ more exciting this way but i'm smh-ing.
oh gosh casi isn't even trying to be quiet GIRL you'll mess everything up. not that it hasn't already been messed up.
AND THE POV ENDS

AND MILO HAS THE NEXT ONE

milo...
oh gosh we're getting that d2 and d11 alliance interaction again and it isn't pleasant in the slightest. feels like the arena all over again. and casi makes me very concerned.
i hate the bickering. no me gusta para nada. 我一点都不喜欢。
and there's a figure! PLOT TINGS

NOT A VELCRA POV. WAS IT VELCRA? WASN'T SHE MY FIRST SUSPICION? AND OH NO THIS IS GOING TO BE SUCH A BIG MISUNDERSTANDING

velcra...
oh whew it wasn't her. her research is online, not in person. BUT GOSH THAT CLIFFHANGER FORM THE LAST POV.
lol her mentor knows exactly what velcra's up to. get 'er, ria.
capitol groups! that want the games! don't like the resurrection!
lol velcra is being such an antihero and i am here for it. better than being a villain.
yesss they're working together! i've never been so happy with a velcra pov before thank you momo

ambrose...is it wholesome time?
sleeping all day is exhausting, I agree. and awww oksana sneaking in and getting shocked. she's adorable. i love her so much.
oh dear something's wrong. is it plot things. are all the remaining kids gonna get wrapped up in this mess?
IT IS PLOT THINGS OMG. I'M GLAD BUT ALSO SO SCARED I DON'T WANT AMBROSE TO LOSE HIS VOICE.
AWWWW AND HE COMFORTS HER. IDK IF THIS PAIR IS MEANT TO BE ROMANTIC BUT IF THEY WERE I'D SHIP THE HECK OUTTA THEM I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. I LOVE IT

PANDORA WHAT'S GOING ON

pandora...
soran! sorry i forgot what district he was or his details. i'll figure it out. brother? but also victor? sorry ahhhh
and they know about the missing kids! And they've told someone yes! and they have velcra's information! stuff is coming together!
THERE IS PROGRESS I LOVE IT
Josephm611 chapter 56 . 7/17/2021
THAT CHAPTER TITLE

micah...
LOL micah is taking milo out for a walk this is lowkey kinda hilarious ARE THERE PLOT THINGS HAPPENING YET I WANT PLOT THINGS esp after that penny and lisse bit last chapter.
wait micah's going home? would he stay for milo. he would stay for milo. idk which i'd prefer bc micah has a a happy wholesome family
whew ok maybe i am glad that micah's not staying. i want happy rossier reunion

donatella...
oh gosh casi won't stop watching that thing why. and protective!tella has been triggered. it's like casi is trying to hurt herself over and over again.
woah this little bit about armina. maybe i'd forgotten because of time, but i think i'm hearing guilt over not having done a better job protecting her sister and GOSH is that sad, esp for me as an older brother.
gosh they fit each other's needs so well

oksana...
clumsy oksana :pleading_face:
LOL she's trying to act nonchalant the more I read about her the more I love her. and she turns too fast. there is zero way she's pulling off nonchalant.
Good mentor Dimara
AND BIG D1 HUG YESSS IT'S SO PRECIOUS AWWWW AHHHH I LOVE THEM SO MUCH THIS MIGHT BE MY FAVORITE FRIENDSHIP IN THIS ENTIRE STORY I LOVE AND ADORE THE D1S.
"I'm glad you didn't leave me" AWWWWWW AMBROSE AHHHHH THIS POV HAS ME COMPLETELY HEAD OVER HEELS IS TOTAL :pleading_face:

varrik... sorry bro you do be growing on me but there's no way you can beat the d1s
what the heck varrik why do you keep watching that footage. just thinking about it makes me squeamish this is messed up. please let there be plot things i need plot things
AYE IT'S LEX YAY
i love how lex is ordering him to spend him time in a better way because she would totally do that. this is lex's positive side. responsible. i love that in a character (zero surprise to literally anyone that knows me).
ok no plot things but they are nice.

lisse... IT'S HER IT'S GOTTA BE PLOT THINGS
oh gosh they're scared they're QUIET quiet!lisse scares me too. when is she ever quiet.
good girl lisse telling someone is the right thign to do. sure beats holding it in and living in constant fear alone. i'm proud of you.
OMG MICAH AND MILO ARE STILL HERE WASN'T I JUST ASKING FOR PLOT THINGS IN THE MICAH POV? I HAVE BEEN SERVED YES
GAH AND IT ENDS HERE I BETTER GET MORE ANSWERS NEXT CHAPTER
Josephm611 chapter 55 . 7/17/2021
ok sprntathon time, which means time to catch up. i'm trying to go fast because i owe a total of 70 reviews to various people so uhhhhh sorry if it's short? but also i might go back to liveblogging so we'll see

velcra... yes i have decided to liveblog
lol velcra imagine people being happy to see you. couldn't be me (?) or if you're doing antihero things maybe i'm glad? her povs are always so... annoying to read. i don't like her attitude.
oh yikes emmi and velcra are not getting along. idk why i hoped for good things. this is tc there is many not good ting
ok i am glad for the peacekeeper jabbing velcra. i like seeing velcra not have power.
at least she's doing research for good? i really do hope it's going well. tho I fear what she'd goign to do with the results of her research... i ain't optimistic about her.

ambrose... YEAH BOI HIIII I MISSED YOU
AWWW HE'S WAKING UP FROM HIS SURGERY PLEASE LET EVERYTHING BE OK. I KNOW THINGS WERE OK IN OKSANA'S POV BUT I HAVE TRUST ISSUES WITH THIS STORY NOW
awww i like him. he is self-controlled. a nice island of reservedness and control in an ocean of crazy. awww he's thinking about home? it's kinda sad but simultaneously adorable how he hasn't fully realized that he could really do anything he wanted to now, even if his parents disagreed. but he's also a good boy, so i feel like he'd go with it, and i love him for that.
AWWW THAT LAST LINE I'M :pleading_face:

milo... hey bro
welp is micah just visiting everyone is that what's happening. i am zero surprised bc such is the way of micah
aww this is just milo being sad. we don't get simply pensive milo often. he's usually taking out his feelings on something physical.
him wanting to be in pain is such a milo thing lol
LOL MICAH BEING SCARED i was lowkey shocked micah did that i know i never could've LOL

casi...
GIRL she's watching her family's interviews? just? Why? gosh casi never knows what's good for her. casi is such a fascinating mess inside of always believing that she's nothing but also trying to hard to prove to herself and everyone that she's something and that is very sad. the fact that she gets angry at the interview but it's more of a reflection of her anger towards herself and just...
at least she has tella here to help here

penny...
oh gosh why are they sneaking out. penny you should've never agreed to this ahhhhhh. is this a plot thing. or is this just the little bits and pieces of life we've had so far. i'm starting to wonder if this is a plot thing.
gosh this is such a plot thing. they're where the train was? JUST WHY? and that guilt inside regarding all the dead? i'm getting sad.
WHO'S ON THE PLATFORM? Velcra? They'd never let her out of her room; she's watched 24/7. THIS PLOT THING AHHHH.
potatoshavings chapter 5 . 7/16/2021
Oksana: Ohh, she's absolutely precious. Another sad backstory, and, honestly, she just needs a hug and a friend. :( I think she might be my favourite character out of the ones we've seen so far, though I know that I've barely scratched the surface of these kids. I think she's a little too gentle for the Hunger Games, though; she's hardened against the world, but not in a way that she's lost her humanity. She definitely doesn't strike me as someone who could kill.

Lex: ...I take back what I said about Oksana being my favourite. I still love her, but Lex is phenomenal. Im not sure what it is about her but I instantly clicked with her whilst reading. And I think that she definitely has a chance to win; I'm actually looking forward to seeing her in the arena! She has the potential for some really cool arcs.

Inara: Wow, this chapter is just full of tributes that I adore. Inara's reasoning for volunteering is so, super sad. There's a lot of tragic tributes in this story. Interesting that they're giving incentives even to the families of those who don't win. I hope it would somehow be routed towards the girls in the orphanage, and not the Sisters. I don't feel like that would go well.

Oriol: He's interesting, to put it lightly. I knew kids like him growing up, but I think that volunteering through a death match would be something that even they would realise was an extremely stupid decision. I'm betting that he's going to be a bloobath; he's just completely in over his head, and I honestly think that Licia has a better chance than him, even if he's older.
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