This was such an amazing first chapter - you've set up such an interesting concept and I can't wait to see where you go with it! I loved your previous story and how you gave a layer of depth and originality to a show I love so I'm so excited to see how you explore this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Shouldn't Chat be trying to get the Mouse to Mariette? He knows she had it after all.

John Paul Jones as a Chat? I dig it!

Damn Im impressed. This is a unique and thrilling adventure youve come up with and Im hooked! Cant wait to see where your story takes us.