Reviews for Fate's Melody
Anime Onnanoko chapter 11 . 4/13/2007
good story
Kuro chapter 11 . 9/16/2005
PLZ UPDATE SOON!
storm-of-insanity chapter 11 . 9/1/2005
next week or next year?

anyway this is good. you should continue it. i'll be waiting
EclipsedLight chapter 11 . 5/15/2005
Hiro really does have a sick mind. Every time someone uses the name Hiro I can't help but think of Tysons or brother. He's a jerk tpwards Kai in the whole thierd season. Any way good story Voltaires dead so what will happen to Kai now? Do continue.
anne bolyn chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Heres something from my fanfic. Tyson runs up to adam at the gates to the all stars building. Tyson says Adam costello I know your guilty caccused but please dont smite me with your god powers. Adam turns around with a bit of a blank look. Fine I admit it I had vincent Highwater kai and rays father assainnated that man cheated on his wife way too much Adam sneering at the thought and that man was getting to big for his belt. No said tyson your spying on people with your black vans. Black vans arent they apart of an underground pizza fieasko. What tyson said through up his hands they were only pizza vans and I couldve gotten free pizza. Nancy release the hounds and if this boffoun is apart of the all stars kick him out at once and take his rip cord
slash kitty chapter 11 . 2/12/2005
you could totally turn this into a one sided yaio slash(whatever you call it) hero/kai. at least to me, it seems that hiro is almost too obsessed with kai even if he he is trying to emotionally scar and kill kai. it would defantly add to the wickid twisted-ness of the story you've got going here. i love it i hope you pick up on it soon. update with the greatest of speeds.

Slash kitty
Ellen chapter 11 . 10/13/2004
EW _ Aw man that was nasty. o.O;; Great now I feel sick.

Ellen.

*barf*
Shinigami-Mimi chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
IMPORTANT: Update for this fic, Fate's Melody will be up before this Sun as well. I thank everyone for being patient. I've been stupid for not updating. ; But this fic is actually coming closer and closer to the end. X.x Until then wait for the new chapter to be up before this Sun! XD
mezurashii chapter 11 . 8/6/2004
W00t! an update! *glomps* _

O.o what a severe death for Voltaire, Kinda gross .

Can't wait to see what happens next

Update soon!

Ja ne, Mezu
Sweet Genocide chapter 11 . 7/3/2004
A week No way I can't wait that long... Oh well Ok I'll be waiting. THis story is so alsome!
Kaisuke chapter 11 . 6/25/2004
*shrieks*Poor Kai...!
Chisai Aoi Okami chapter 11 . 6/25/2004
XD I haven't read this for so long! XD Voltair got killed!11 (ah all the nice blood...) gotta admit, Kai's hanging in there pretty well, I wanna know what happens to Kai! update soon! *hugs you*
Syaoran-Lover chapter 11 . 6/24/2004
Hey, that was so damn cruel!

I mean, we never got to know if Voltaire actually cares for Kai (and that's why he saved him) or if he just did because he had other intentions...

Does that mean Kai will now control the illegal business of his granfather's?

And did the other guests know Kai or Voltaire was going to be killed that night? o_O?

OMG, poor Kai! And just what did the poor butler have to do with this? Where are the other servants?

OMG, what'll be of Kai now? He can't involve others, so now he's alone against Hiro and his father!

Good thing you're going to be updating daily, otherwise I'd have to track you down and make your life miserable! D

(VERY) nice ending touch, though... I could actually picture Kai kneeling there and suffering with the images in his head and the song playing from the watch... did Hiro leave it there?

Cruel way to kill a man though... and just why was Kai actually that hit by Voltaire's death if he hates the man?

Read ya definitely next!
xXxDeadValentinexXx chapter 10 . 6/6/2004
oh my god you're killing me! dude, this story is kick ass. Full of suspense and everything. please update!
Kaisuke chapter 10 . 5/1/2004
Update soon!
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