Reviews for To be a friend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So wish that was how Merlin ended |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo! What a whirlwind of a wrap up! The scene with the druids was very sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story. Absolutely loved the magic Merlin used here. Brilliant. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Vaya con dios, amiga! Good luck with all you do and many thanks for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks to you for writing this! This second chapter so well balanced between the bitter and the sweet. very well done! |
![]() ![]() Thanks for a great story. Hoping for an epilogue? |
![]() ![]() Good chapter & I'm glad that Arthur had a talk with Merlin but I'm still disappointed in him. He has a lot of nerve demanding proof, gawking at Merlin's scars with no real thought to the pain he was causing and telling Merlin "you have no business talking to me in that tone". WOW - I'd say Merlin has every right. Arthur owes him a huge apology & a huge thank you but I doubt Merlin will ever get either :( I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love chapter two, hope Arthur makes the right decision, which at the moment looks like he will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how if Merlin goes then everyone goes. Generally I would hope that Arthur’s people were more loyal than that but I think you’ve made a very good case that it’s not just Merlin that they’re loyal to.. they are loyal to the righteousness and purity and nobility of a cause. Arthur has failed them all that way at this point. And it’s quite nice to see Merlin receiving some support. I’m excited to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is good. Update when you come. When i was reading your story it felt as if i was been immersed in the Merlin universe. You're a great author. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ARTHUR YOU DOLLOP HEAD! CHANGE YOUR MIND! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a greand opening to a story; and I am impressed of how close to the BBC Merlin Universe you scetch all of the characters here; the impulsive Arthur, the wise Gaius, the loyal Gwaine and the loving Lancelot and Guinevere. Very good! Many thanks1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take that Arthur! Lets hope he can listen to someone other than himself for a change. Thanks, I almost hope that Merlin and his true friends/family do leave. |
![]() ![]() Very good so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love, love, the way you did Gaius speech! Everything he said is so true and Arthur desperately needed to hear it. The king is going to have some honest making up to do even if he does change his mind. Starting with proving he does know how to apologize. And not an apology followed by an insult or something. It needs to be sincere if Merlin is going to trust him. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! |