Reviews for Forever
R111 chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Very nice.
Rose Eclipse chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
Crepy! I loved it!
Kokui chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
I LOVED THAT SO MUCH! Then again, I love Kurama . . .
InuHieiKurama chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Hi! It's me again! I like reading your poetry! It's so beautiful...well, keep writing more! _~

n0T1nu53 chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
nice! :) i love this, it's really sweet! great job here... _
Draith chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
I really like this! I love poems, and Kurama... and you did a really good job with the description. I also like your word choice, as it really makes or breaks a poem.

The only suggestion I would make is not to use "perpetually" three times... it worked alright the first two, because of the way the poem was going. But perhaps another word would be better suited at the end. I don't know, I'm a poet, and I am in love with the thesausus, so I can't really say much, I just, yeah... heehee. I like this, I'm off to read your other ones on Hiei!

pyrebi chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
OOps, looks like 'Cold' is in the place 'Forever' is s'possed to be... Quick, change it! I love 'Cold', but I wanna read 'Forever', too! _