Great story!

Nice

Great Story - just wish it went about 10,000 words more to find out what the idiots in the south do in reaction to this.

Jon fought smart, Jon won.

Ahh I have missed you:) Outstanding as always.

Nice to see a finished “Gamer” story. Might have been a bit easier to digest if broken into more manageable chapters, but it’s not the biggest issue I’ve seen a story have. Any chance of a continuation or epilogue? I’m curious as to what ended up happening in the south.

Excellent story! Thanks for sharing.

He is just different! I wonder what happened with Dan?

I really like it! I think it was a great way to get the gamer idea to that kind of enviroment!

well done. The plot is indeed very good. it would have been better if you divided the story in to couple of chapters to a better organization.

Awesome story
Love it so much
Every scene was amazing

I don't normally like gamer fics, but that was well done

I didnt like it. Doesnt seem like a proper story, more a stream of consciousness. Also, compared to your other stories - Mary Sue is strong with this one. Too strong.

Great story, but where is Dany ?

I loved this. It's insanely wonderful.

I feel the ending was a bit more rushed through than the beginning, but it works all the same.

Thanks for writing and sharing this!

Holy shit this was amazingly well done. Well paced and well written, no real loose ends and everything wrapped up nicely. Part of me wishes for a x# of years later prologue but it’s perfect without it too.