One of the best stories I ever read. Simply magnificent.

glad to se your writing again have a suggestion after the greyjoy rebellion robert puts stannis in charge of the iron islands

Thank you! I spent all my day reading this. (Even if I had other things to do)...
This was a great fiction that I casually stumbled. I didn't read the author name till the end and I was not surprised that it was you. I didn't even know the length of the fic, nor how many chapters it had... Shame on me that it snared me so completely that it didn't let me go till I finished it. But it was worth it, and like many fics of its kind, I hunger for more to read...
Wonderful Idea, and nice overall plot (even though I think you could have expanded this to a novel like fictionThank again.

Well, that was pretty entertaining.

Wow. Awesome story! And I agree, so many gamer-Jon stories just get bogged down in endless grinding and sidequests that Jon rarely even gets to leave Winterfell. I think a lot more stories should be like this one.

Ok with the bashing here, I get why you’d target Ned given how he got his head turned around by every schemer in Kings Landing plus he’s truly like a rock in the sense that it takes a lot to get him actively moving against his enemies & even then he doesn’t take sufficient measures like he should’ve shipped off his daughters without delay the moment things got heated between him & the Lannisters they’re potential hostages to be used against him & the Lannisters know the city far better than him.

But what’s up with the Robb bashing, he was nowhere like this in both book & show canon so unless it’s the butterfly effect from Old Jon’s time travel shenanigans then it makes no sense. Did Jon’s newfound zeal for self improvement create a distance between him & Robb to the point Robb was jealous & resentful the same way Theon was?

And what’s with Old Jon & Bran from the original timeline is it canon Jon from the show?

I really like your writing style, it's very efficient, but rich. Interesting story. It didn't go the way I thought it would initially.

I love

Jon murdering Catelyn and then feeling no remorse is when I decided to drop this.

This is amazing, especially since I only watched like, eight episodes and I could follow easily. Thank you.

This was pretty fucking cool. All the story is missing is Jon being happy at the end.

Great story, one of my new favorites in Got franchise. Then again The Wizard of Harrenhal is already a favorite of mine as well.

I usually don't care for bashing, but Ned and Robb it was well written enough that i understand.

I was really happy to see a new fic from you and the fact it's already completed is just gold. The Wizard of Harrenhal is still one of my all time favorite fics, so I was thrilled to see another GOT fanfiction.

My favorite part has to be the dragons in Valaryia (which just makes sense!) and that they all decide to move to the Far North. I have to confess I also enjoyed the Tully bashing. No one ever seems to bash Rob or Ned so it was nice for a change of pace. And of course a Jon who isn't a naive, blithering idiot is definitely a plus.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Fantastic. I think this is one of the 2 best Jon focused stories I’ve read (Maester wolf being the other) and definitely the best Gamer xover I’ve read. Thanks for writing this.

Magic time travel, fine. But why would Jon give advice to his past self using a gamified attribute system? That doesn't make sense.