Such a refreshing take on GoT fix-it story. I love how Know-Nothing Jon Snow actually made some resolute and decent decisions and did not tolerate everyone's stupidity.

This is such a great story and wonderful way to stretch the characters' growth or decline as based on choice. It left me hungering for more. This was a fantastic experience and I look forward to more of your work.

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An interesting concept. I enjoyed seeing the progression and how the skills were broken down. I wonder why you didn’t have Jon meet the other side of his family?

I can only assume you are no Robb Stark fan, but a great story none the less.

A great story. I love it

It was a lot to put in a one-shot, but the game mechanics actually made sense, given the world you set it in.

Well, it was well written technically, but Jon the Gary Stu was kinda...eh. I wasn't a huge fan of how paper thin everyone else was, and it basically boiled down to "stupider than Jon, so **** them." I know you were limited since this was a one shot, but a bit more depth would have been nice. Maybe have Tyrion survive and show that not everyone else on the planet was a total moron.

cool story looked forward to the next chapter.
I liked how you developed Jon, I hope that Sansa grows up as a true lady of the North, personally I hope he marries some new great lord that Jon names either for the Valley or the Rivers.
Another thing would be that in the next arc we see the Martells and the supposed Aegon try to claim the iron throne it would be great for Jon to say that if she cannot survive the dragon fire she is not a true Valyrian. as well as a Stannis undecided on what to do since the great other no longer exists and Melissandre would have to investigate that.
I think the dragons could begin to adapt further north and take some places as their home such as the Cailin Pit and Sea Dragon Point.
I think the Lannisters like the good strategists they are will bend the knee and old Leon will ask for some minor things like legitimizing his grandchildren and a pair of Valyrian steel swords.
the problem now would be Daenerys and her three dragons how easy it would be for Jon to return her to Essos.
for a possible partner of Jon because I think you could put Arianne but only as a breeding machine and then die after giving birth to some 3 babies.

This was a great travel. Thanks for taking us with you.

It's always good to read your stories, and this one didn't dissapoint.
As a one shot, it furfills the purpose you gave it, even if there are some things take could maybe be a bit more explored in the future, but over all, well done.

not what i would call a gamer story and probably sould have gone a bit father south before ending it other then that not to bad

Very happy to see another work from you, and it was a very entertaining fic. Good job, and thank you :)

Great story, highly enjoyable. Any chance of a second chapter, possibly to see either the reactions of the other great lords through the last quarter of this, or what happens when Daenerys and her three dragons arrive?

Thank you for this beautiful story. It is indeed the 1st completed gamer story that I have encountered.