As mush I loved all your earlier GoT stories.

I am simply incapable of taking any 'gamer' story seriously.

Good story but one thing I noticed was in the second half or so you started to write Nuncle instead of Uncle, only thing I could personally find off about the story

Outstanding work. Just one question, however, what about Daenerys Targaryen?

A damn fine story, and satisfying even if Reader's fatigue sets in after so long without a chapter break. I'll be looking to see if you have other works, and checking your favorites. Well done.

This was a very compelling read, thank you!

Surprisingly good. Would have loved more slice-of-life. well written

Amazing work as always!

Delighted to have a new story from you! Jon is my favorite character from the books still. Killing the Tully’s and Baelish is always a favorite of mine.

Interesting story, liked how you went with flying ship to fast travel everything. Felt a little rushed once he got back to the North and didnt expect the sudden hate on Robb and feeling like he is a squid and then the sudden assassination attempt but cant love everything in life.

This was awesome. You set a plot and stuck to it. It had a great length too. Nothing too extravagant. Everything was simple and believable.

Brilliant as usual. What an unexpected treat!

I enjoyed this one, it was a little rushed in places but overall the pace kept me hooked. John's perspective of the various characters was great. The 'Gamer' tag seems a bit off given how irrelevant that ultimately becomes. I wish this were longer but I am happier that it is complete. Hope to see more from you in the near future.

Nice fic, even if it was a bit abrupt at times.

The ending was also a bit anti-climatic, but I guess that was difficult to avoid with the power that Jon had gathered.

This story was a treat for sure. The growth of Jon from finding the book to its actual explanation for the arrival and magic of book was ingenious. I felt sorry for Robb, he turned a bit like Joffrey.
I would have liked if you have chapter 2 of this story. As Jon’s venture in the south and his meeting with Dany and Ser Baristan is explored further.
Kudos

Love it! Also holy crap that was a 43k one-shot! You could have made this into like 8 separate chapters and called it a short story more than a one-shot. Kudos