Excellent story. I wish there was more.

This would have been epic if it was multichapter! But its still great as is.

I liked it very much. Can only recommend it!

Interesting take on Jon's story and potential there.

Nice!

Cool story, well-told

I enjoyed your story. Smart Jon is much less frustrating.

First awsome story I always like a story where Jon is more targaryen than a meek snow and you did it wonderfully. Second this needs a sequel if only to sow up the dany storyline.

I like it.

AWESOME STORY!

I enjoyed reading this. It was an good read. That said, it could have been better. It doesn't compare favourably to your other works.
Some points in no particular order:
-Too many dragons;
-Greenseeing is too OP;
-Dragons too OP;
-Daenerys is completely left out;
-The plot is a bit broken;
-Plot clashes with canon history;
Some others I can't remember now...
Still, for all it's faults, it's still better than 99% of fanfictions. I may reread in the future.

Ooo this wqs actually so good wtf so impressed

Holy fucking shit what a story
Like wow, man! I don't usually comment, I'm more of a lurker, but goddamn! Had me hooked from start to finish, one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have read in a very long time.

Big thanks for writing it!

Fascinating take. 8 like the twist on the trope. Very well wrote

Fantastic story!