This is an absolutely awesome story. The characterizations you have, the themes, the exploration... all of it was amazing.

It was an entertaining story till the end. I really liked the idea of the book. Shame it didn't hold for longer and dropped off later in the story. It really was only a half-gamer story.

I can't help but compare the first half as a better one where Jon was moving with a purpose and guidance from his old self. I liked the plotline and what he did to change his world and events. Even the murders had a purpose that was clear. In later parts after he traveled suffered a bit with Jon becoming progressively more jerk and having an "I'm above you all" kind of godlike attitude. It was a bit offputting. Dragons were cool, but jeez, way too many of them to cram in both mentioned locations. I can't imagine how would they live and hide like that. Even 10 times less would be too much to handle.

Also what about Dany? Perhaps Jon became so numb to the familiar connection because of Rob that he completely disregarded his Taregaryn family completely? Seems odd he never even checked. It felt like he didn't really care about anyone apart from 1) Ghost, 2) Bran, 3) Arya, 4) Rickon a bit... and that's all? It felt like he became too emotionless at the end.

Not bad at all the Nuncle typo was quite a bother since it was repeated so much

I've never read the books or watched the show. This had me thoroughly entertained. I enjoyed your story telling immensely.

Honestly, while Jon comes off as as harsh, his actions are pretty realistic, making the Dragonlands (Lands Beyond the Wall) his capital was wise as any rebellious army would have to March through the largest kingdom which held Lords who are fiercely loyal to him, not to mention he basically has the luxury of flying south with thousands of nukes and basically oneshotting any wouldbe rebel without his personal territory suffering any loss.

Very interesting;would love to see more if you feel able to write it.

Enjoying the story thanks

Nice story...really enjoyed it.

For how short this is (compared to others) I LOVE it!

this was really good!

A satisfying read; thank you

like the story, good job implementing gamer elements al the start.

update pls...this is far from complete sir!

...limestone is actually a pretty decent building material, dude. I mean, the pyramids were built with it.

and I was actually expecting that the weakening of the Sept was to take out Catelyn and Cersei at once. when they arrive and Robert demands to be taken to the crypts. until you had him weaken the tower.

also, Sansa is definitely a Tully.

and Jon is not "unblooded", when the Greyjoys attacked. he'd directly killed the Lannister assassin and Ramsey. indirectly, several others. and probably laid the seeds for a war between Tywin and Robert.

and what about Dany?

Great story, Well done Author.