Reviews for Runaway
ArthurWheeler chapter 1 . 11/17/2020
All the feels, all over again. You wonderful maniac. It's so good because it makes me feel just as the series and through the moon do. I also think you captured the genuine cannon on Rayla and Soren perfectly. Well done... Now I will suffer with you. Thank you!
Readallday1243 chapter 1 . 10/26/2020
Overall I like this story. It’s a nice one shot
Readallday1243 chapter 1 . 10/26/2020
That line “tears blind her, but she runs” I think changing the “but she run” to something else.

Maybeshe kept running even when her legs were ready to give out, she kept going.

Her heart racing, Tears begin to flow and blind her.

She ran without a sense of direction

Idk. I felt it’s better without it mentioning the coward.