|Reviews for Adam's Control|
| xKaizer chapter 2 . 3/11
| A Random Anon chapter 1 . 1/4
With the twice per year Update schedule we might be in for another chapter! Pretty please? With sprinkles?
| Godeater25 chapter 2 . 12/30/2021
Well I hope you will update soon
| Jinx or Feed chapter 2 . 10/7/2021
well i just hope this story won't be dead
| ChadThunderCock 666 chapter 1 . 8/7/2021
looking forward for adam x phyrra
| kaxipoptos chapter 2 . 7/16/2021
I was honestly surprised when I saw the update. Kind of feared the story was abandoned, good to know that is not the case and that it will be the focus for now.
So Adam offed Roman? Can't say it is a big loss but now he will have to watch out for Neo on top of everything else. With the amount of enemies Adam has he should really be looking for allies otherwise one of the people gunning for him will get a lucky shot.
You pulled the possessive and jealous but not quite insane and creepy lover nicely. Also thank god you will give your own spin to the plot. Frankly speaking canon was a mess and I think you can only improve it.
Speaking of pairings I see in the title Blake, Yang and Cinder. Any chance Weiss or Phyra can be included? Phyra might appreciate/be interested to someone who not only treat her as somebody special (her whole reason for falling for Jaune) but who is stronger than her as well (Phyra is good but Adam is better if only due to his experience in actual fighting and not tournaments/sparring). As for Weiss it will be interesting to see her interacting with Adam (Adam for all his rhetoric went after Blake when Weiss was there as well, there is just no comparison whom would be more valuable target for the white fang). Why, Weiss can actually join Blake in their quest to earn "forgiveness" right?
| GNTR96 chapter 2 . 7/15/2021
I was starting to wonder if you've give up this story. Glad to known that i was wrong. As for the pairing could you put Neo inside? There are virtually no Adam x Neo fanfic. Just a idea but you're still the boss. You decide. See you next time.
| Tombs456 chapter 2 . 7/11/2021
Literally just found the one so glad to see it get new blood after so long
| A Random Anon chapter 2 . 7/11/2021
Damn yeah! This is seriously promising and I'd love to see this get more attention. Any chance you'd take suggestions? Because Ruby and Yang would likely be the best starting girls to get him to mellow out a little. Also, seeing Ruby get corrupted would be hot as hell.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2021
Okay I admit I grew to hate Adam in the show especially since all he amounted to was a crazy ex boyfriend stalker
But I’m willing to give this a go especially since it seems Adam won’t be drinking the Ozpin cool aid and while not being a lunatic retains he hatred for the likes of well the Kingdom of Atlas
But you are right what better way for Adam to overcome his loathing of humanity by fucking several human woman so looking forward to when he fucks all three Schnee woman, Yang and Ruby, Pyrrha etc
Hm wonder how Blake would feel if she found Adam fucking Kali
| Father Alexander Anderson chapter 2 . 7/10/2021
Love it! This is by far my favorite story of yours and I’m extremely happy that you decided to continue it.
| TheOnlyKing chapter 2 . 7/10/2021
huh, didn't think you'd update this anytime soon but glad I was wrong
| noblevampire1071 chapter 2 . 7/9/2021
I am so excited about this story. Cant wait to read your version of Adam. You always make exciting characters. The best revenge against Schenee would be to seduce his daughter away lol.
| fallendemon248 chapter 2 . 7/9/2021
Yes I am so looking towards this continuing I can't wait to see what you do
| hellfire45 chapter 2 . 7/9/2021
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I am glad to see this will be getting more updates as there is not nearly enough Adam centric stories