Reviews for Adam's Control
hellfire45 chapter 4 . 9/23/2022
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
ImHateful chapter 3 . 9/22/2022
Correction for me previous comment.

"He talks less but when he does talk he gets straight the point, doesn't fluff his words with her, it's very cut and dry Is what I meant." It's like you wouldn't reward her with reactions or words and treat her as a nuisance and don't like say it out loud but give off the signals that he doesn't want to say anything to her or have time for her angst that she thinks she's some fallen hero who was lead astray by the big bad bull, he should hit her with that is fiction and that isn't how reality works. It's like you want to act like a child then you're going to be treated as a child and be ignored because I don't have time for you way.
ImHateful chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! I enjoyed the back and forth from Adam and yang and I was surprised you took that route but It was a joyful surprise! I do think Adam would of used rougher words though and been more dominant (not in the fight) but like aura(personal air), actions and words, I do think he should be a little more cut with blake though, He has angry for her and now that he found out she replaced him, yeah I think he should say less to her and sometimes ignore her as well as when he does talk it hits less but it hits home, Of course Adam loves blake or he thinks she's a possession but it's like giving the time out treatment or silent treatment and no matter how much they beg for attention you don't reward it and ignore it. I think that would hurt blake more than his anger and words because he has never done this before and that he's treating her like shes nothing to him or just like a nuisance.

It goes into my last comment about her seeing him enjoy someone else more than he ever enjoyed her and that since she moved on, he can move on and it might be hypocritical for her but that would hurt a lot more than other words or actions because she pegged him as obsessed with her and her only but it also points out how wrong she is for thinking she was the only one for him.

But this is all suggestion, you don't need to write like this and I will still support this story with whichever direction you go, I don't want to pressure you into it, you don't have to do anything you don't want to and nobody has the right to tell you what to write or how to write, so do what you want to do!

Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter, like seriously! I hope you have a great week and are staying safe! Take care!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
Not Beilvable... I Thought This Story had Depth
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2022
If your Potrayal of Adam is more intelligent than he should know that terrorism would put a Target on Meangrie... especially if that terrorism led to a downfall of Beacon
AFalseName chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
Glad to see this continue
fresh prince1 chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
Glad to see a new chapter
fallendemon248 chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
I can't tell if yang is serious about catching Adam or just wants a taste of him
Guest chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
You cannot imagine how happy you have made me with this. And Yang is the perfect start.
ToriSenkiTan chapter 4 . 9/22/2022
I'm REALLY glad you didn't go for the psycho-ex Adam, I really hope you don't abandon this story. It is the only few fics that depict Adam as more of a tactical fighter instead of the rush in dumbass.
ImHateful chapter 2 . 8/24/2022
Update please! I love this concept as well as your portrayal of Adam, I can't wait for the next chapter, I also hope that Adam makes Blake hurt (Emotions wise.) Like fucking someone in front of her by "accident." Or showing much more pleasure and enjoyment in fucking the other person than he ever showed her, I think he shouldn't tie her up and fuck other girls in front of her because that would be saying he's doing all this on purpose but should be subtle and Lowkey to make it seem like what he's doing is in his private moments that blakes intruding on, so that way blake is hurting herself but adam knows that she's watching but she doesn't, she thinks she's hidden and as much as it would pain her to admit, to focused and in pleasure of his partner to notice her, which hurts more because to be in that much pleasure to were someone like adams senses to be blinded would be a bitter pill to swallow and make her feel inadequate and lacking compared to his new partner because she never brought him that much pleasure to be able to get him to act like that or blind his senses to the world and get him to wholly focus on her and only her. The partner in question should be Cinder or maybe Neo because of them being an unknown to blake as well as beautiful human woman, the fact that their human as well would push the blade even further because of Adams blatant hatred for them, so to be able to tame the bull that she never could even dream to tame would push that feeling of inferiority even further.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2022
I hope you will continue this story.
xKaizer chapter 2 . 3/11/2022
Moreover
A Random Anon chapter 1 . 1/4/2022
With the twice per year Update schedule we might be in for another chapter! Pretty please? With sprinkles?
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