Reviews for Injustice Book 2: Darkness in the Light |
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![]() ![]() This is trash, hate fake positive reviews, nothing about this story was good at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's rather unfortunate that the story has, by the looks of it, been abandoned. I don't know whether or not it's because you've lost interest in the story or in the character of Naruto, but it looks like your focus has shifted. Despite that, knowing that the story may never get an update again or may not receive an update for a rather long time, I would like to talk about what I really like about this story. When I first discovered the story, I was confused, but as it progressed, a lot of the elements that made me really love Naruto, the original, as a character started to shine through. You're a unique author in the way you handle progression—it's quite captivating. While Naruto may not be the strongest, even in part two, we can see that emotionally and mentally, he's grown. Not a lot of authors allow their characters to have such human flaws, to make mistakes, and to feel human. Take Naruto's relationship with Barbara, for instance. A lot of other authors would either have that relationship pan out or avoid it altogether. So many are afraid to do the "will-they-won't-they" dynamic because they either don't know how to or find it boring. You're not afraid to embrace the monotony and the boringness of human interaction, and I think reading those moments genuinely makes your story better. The way Naruto contemplates whether or not he's truly making a difference or if he's doing it for himself or for others is fascinating. I could go on writing this for another hour, but it's been brought to my attention that fanfiction now has a word count limit. I do not know what that is, and I do not want this to be cut off, so thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like the outlandish reviews come from those who lost their way through fanfiction I always thought Canon Naruto would have been much more powerful and skilled had he been written like injustice Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update this or are you done with this story franchise it's really really good and I love rereading it even if you are done with it thank you so much for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, but are you going to update this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I desire more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh a great story! I dont know how much is left in this book but im looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() Gonna be honest I'm disappointed that the akatsuki are here, Naruto crossovers are unironically way better without Naruto characters when he goes to another world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally found time to read this chapter. Good pacing this chapter with how much things are happening. There's enough info to know what's going on at each point of the chapter. |
![]() ![]() WTF harem is not good. why do always some writers like you fantasized harem. the story should be scrapped or rewrite it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH |
![]() ![]() Great chapter can’t wait to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about Mongol and the war world ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot was revealed in this chapter after the dark side club mission which brings me to a conclusion, darkseid will make an appearance maybe not now but soon. I have a question where is Mr miracle the adopted son of darkseid ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter dude I'm glad Naruto found a balance definitely Can't wait for the next update and to see Naruto hopefully wreck zetsu in the future |