Reviews for The Beauty Beneath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Since HG's birthday is 19 September, she was already 15 when she started dating VK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed it, ver nice and cute. Could've done with more harry/fleur but im just greedy like that and it's not hard to imagine why you stopped here. Thanks for writing what you did, i love all your works so far, im gonna start making my way through everything you have:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should really separate the chapters, it gets kind of confusing |
![]() ![]() Hi ! Please, excuse my language, I m in fact French ;) soooo firstly, I really really like your story. All of them in fact. i would love to have a sequel if you can do it. I can wait until the end of the chocolate to have it, so be sure i will be a very patient fan and I will be the pom pom girl in the comments ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! pls update this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a brilliant story. I like the fast pace, the relationship between Fleur/Harry and Harry-Sirius, Dumbledore’s idiocy (which rises to the level of malice), the conflicted Snape, and the overall plot. Hoping to see more. |
![]() ![]() really good and maybe somebody trying to get in the way of fleur and harry maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I really love this fic! I do hope that one day you will return to add more because this fic has totally blown me away. I love complicated plots and mysteries (even though I never seem to be able to put all of the pieces together to solve them before the big reveal at the end of the stories. You have an amazing imagination and I really wish that I had discovered your writings far sooner than this year. I'd always been leery of fics where Harry ends up marked by Body, but that is because, until now, the author's had lame plots, cardboard characterizations, and made Harry into some kind of maga-super-wizard without flaws and never behaving like a teenager who had and abusive childhood,(or if they did, Harry became a worse person than Riddle was). I had absolutely no problems staying absorbed by your story and the only thing I didn't like was that there is no next chapter to read right now. But I will not badger you, because I know that when you come back to this, it will be absolutely worth the wait. |
![]() ![]() You realize there's a chapter system right? also line breaks. use them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read up to latest release (Book 5 Chapter 12), Not terrible plot wise, feels very fast paced but I am quite happy with skipping the eternal summer. Certain elements are very interesting, excited if you can actually make the Voldemort plot work out since this often can drive you into a narrative hole. Overall pleased, hopefully this continues since I like the pacing quite a lot, even though I could appreciate some more Fluff in the main pairing. Looking forward to further releases. On the editorial side: Please divide your story into chapters instead of having it all be on one massive page, it helps with popularity and for people to follow your story over several releases! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Just read through this in what... a day and a half? A very interesting twist that I didn’t expect, but not an unwelcome one. If you continue this story I’ll definitely keep reading it to see where you take it - your writing style is excellent and comprehensive, and the relationships are believably written. Well done for the story so far and I’ll be checking for updates periodically. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fck it, I'm reading this again |
![]() ![]() Nice job... all of it. Made the most if the craziness the FF normsl tsles and twusted them all around. Certain charscters had more depth, seems like Voldemort's idea of making Harty immortal may be to hVe hi. possessed. |