|Reviews for Alone Together|
| Mariah chapter 19 . 1/3
wow so when will hiccup meet his new girlfriend and will berk discover hiccup ran away?
| WiteScythe chapter 19 . 1/2
First, thank goodness Hiccup came back, by which I mean his memories. Second, GROSS, just... ugh. I nearly lost my lunch at the thought about Tuffnut and Astrid-bluragk.
I agree, Astrid strives to be a shield maiden to bring honor to herself and her clan... but most to herself.
Tuffnut, he just wants to have fun causing chaos, can’t do that if he’s in a relationship. Unless that relationship is a rider and his dragon, what better way to cause havoc than with a explosive breathing creature, eh?
Keep up the good work, -WiteScythe-
| atomicsub927 chapter 18 . 12/30/2020
Do whatever you feel is best for the story my good sir/madam
| atomicsub927 chapter 17 . 12/30/2020
Psychological profiles. Did I just see a criminal minds reference?
| Kacper983 chapter 18 . 12/21/2020
It didn't take long for Hiccup to find a girl that would interest him. Looks like Astrid-ship has sailed. :V
As for chapter length, I'm all for longer chapters. This one felt really short.
| WiteScythe chapter 18 . 12/20/2020
I don’t mind waiting for updates, as long as they’re good. Is the zippleback from training gonna bond with Tuff. How is a single person supposed to control a twin headed dragon. The girl, is she some how going to be involved with hiccup, if he is still the same lovable goof we all love and care for.
| Kacper983 chapter 17 . 12/17/2020
I have trouble with deciding which plot is more interesting at the moment, Hiccup's or Berk's.
| Kacper983 chapter 16 . 12/17/2020
Is Astrid feeling guilty? Looks like our ice queen has a heart after all. Or maybe she just doesn't want to be in trouble. I'm hoping for the first option.
And how Hiccup will meet his tribe? I already have 2 theories. ;)
| NightHowler0 chapter 17 . 12/15/2020
This is a really confusing chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
| WiteScythe chapter 17 . 12/15/2020
Nooo, Hiccup... Toothless... are they gone... just like that?! Give me a moment, ok breath one aaand two, okay I’m back. OMG please tell me Tuff found a dragon... one that won’t kill him on sight. I actually like your idea of psych profiles, thumbs up!
Looking forward to more, -witescythe-
| Whiskerface chapter 17 . 12/15/2020
I had hoped this would end well for Hiccup, but I should have known better. Amnesia for both Hiccup and Toothless—kid, you've got to start listening to the dragon more.
I’ve never read a story where Tuffnut is afraid of death, or where he finds the cove accidentally. I want to see where you go with him and the remainder of the Berkians.
| NightHowler0 chapter 16 . 12/12/2020
I really like the idea of the two kingdoms. I’m looking forward to the next one.
| WiteScythe chapter 16 . 12/10/2020
He-he, the panic is setting dear little Astrid. Oh, I can’t wait until I taste(read) the chaos that will befall Berk, I’m practically drooling... and I don’t mean that in a gross way. Ravens, nice curveball for Hiccup there. BTW, I really like the way you wrote Fishlegs in this one.
Looking forward to seeing more, -WiteScythe-
| NightHowler0 chapter 15 . 11/27/2020
Hiccup. You should have listened to Toothless. That shadow figure was really weird and abrupt. Can’t wait for the next one.
| NightHowler0 chapter 14 . 11/27/2020
What’s with the weird pressure in his head? I’m really excited about how this story will go and I like that there will be continuous Berkian POVs.