I feel horrible for laughing at this. Poor Ryou...

Hnh, what a frightening bedtime story. xD Oh my goodness. Awesome writing though, of course. Amazing how the scariest thing in this WASN'T the gore...

Fucking impressive!

IC, short, with the right pace. Perfect.

Oh my goodness...

I pride myself as a writer but I honestly have no words to describe how amazing this fic is... I am... Speachless and flabberghast and... Totally in love with this fic... I think I've read it about seven times now... I just can't get over it...

Thank you a million times for putting this up and I'm just so so sorry I didn't find this sooner... I found it accidentaly while browsing for stuff for a Tendershipping friend of mine and... Wow... I fell in love almost instantly...

I myself usually like writing more the inner thoughts and as little dialog as possible so this was a complete 180 to what I'm used to... Maybe that's why it caught me so much? Thank you once again... I honestly and truly love this to bits... You did a great job with both of them and really, I want to hug Ryou so much now...

I should probably stop rambling. Sorry about all that, i just really, really am bowled over by this... If you EVER do something like this again PLEASE, PLEASE let me know becuase I will be front and center... Wow...

At first this was confusing, but one I settled into the flow of things I saw that it was really well done :D

I've never read a dialogue-only story before, but you pulled it off well. Good job, kiddo (you're probably older than me).

Damn, that was angsty. O.O

Incredibly well written, and portrayed their relationship in a great way.

I want to hug Ryou now.

Absolutely brilliant.

Wow... I'm pretty sure I missed some of the subtle things in there, but this is so good! ...And creepy, but morbid things can be chilling to read...

I normally don't like dialogue-only stories because they get confusing or boring, but this doesn't. It's fairly clear throughout, and it never gets dull.

The interaction between the two is perfect... Bakura's a monster... What I'm getting is that he hurt Ryou, bandaged him, then freaked him out with a story about his life in Egypt... And possibly licked his blood or tears... I'm not exactly sure, but it doesn't really change the mood either way...

Very nice one-shot. I'm going to have to explore your profile in search of more...

I love Yami Bakura's mocking tone at the end. I really enjoy reading dialogue-only fics, and this one is done very nicely (in that I wasn't confused as to who was saying what XP). Lovely work~

~firedraygon97

I loved the writing style for this and the storyline was amazing but I was wondering at the end when it says "your wrists should have scabbed over by now" I was wondering if Ryou had tryed to kill himself by slitting his wrists but maybe I'm reading into it too much anyway great story

strange but good

Wow... that was awesome and very cool... Keep up the good work.

I... don't know why this strikes me so much, but it does. /Very/ interesting; the dialogue-style fits well... rather than having detail to support it, the entirety of the story was expressed through mere spoken words... and expressed well.

I usually have a great dislike for anything mixing dub version with other versions, with AUs of Egypt... but I enjoyed this. A lot. The characterization was scarily /apt./ And that's a very good, very rare thing to find.

Especially enjoyed the very end of it. Wonderful, wonderful dialogue.

Uh, well, the only idea of Yami Bakura telling a bedtime story’s somehow scaring. I like the way this is written a lot. Confusing at the begin, and gradually scaring... Poor Ryou.

uh...

its kinda hard to tell whos talkin sometimes...

Dude!That was evil!But good.