|Reviews for Hypocrisy
| kristen chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I feel horrible for laughing at this. Poor Ryou...
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Hnh, what a frightening bedtime story. xD Oh my goodness. Awesome writing though, of course. Amazing how the scariest thing in this WASN'T the gore...
| sourpancake chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
IC, short, with the right pace. Perfect.
| Written Parody chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Oh my goodness...
I pride myself as a writer but I honestly have no words to describe how amazing this fic is... I am... Speachless and flabberghast and... Totally in love with this fic... I think I've read it about seven times now... I just can't get over it...
Thank you a million times for putting this up and I'm just so so sorry I didn't find this sooner... I found it accidentaly while browsing for stuff for a Tendershipping friend of mine and... Wow... I fell in love almost instantly...
I myself usually like writing more the inner thoughts and as little dialog as possible so this was a complete 180 to what I'm used to... Maybe that's why it caught me so much? Thank you once again... I honestly and truly love this to bits... You did a great job with both of them and really, I want to hug Ryou so much now...
I should probably stop rambling. Sorry about all that, i just really, really am bowled over by this... If you EVER do something like this again PLEASE, PLEASE let me know becuase I will be front and center... Wow...
| happycucumber chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
At first this was confusing, but one I settled into the flow of things I saw that it was really well done :D
I've never read a dialogue-only story before, but you pulled it off well. Good job, kiddo (you're probably older than me).
| KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Damn, that was angsty. O.O
Incredibly well written, and portrayed their relationship in a great way.
I want to hug Ryou now.
| Muria chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Wow... I'm pretty sure I missed some of the subtle things in there, but this is so good! ...And creepy, but morbid things can be chilling to read...
I normally don't like dialogue-only stories because they get confusing or boring, but this doesn't. It's fairly clear throughout, and it never gets dull.
The interaction between the two is perfect... Bakura's a monster... What I'm getting is that he hurt Ryou, bandaged him, then freaked him out with a story about his life in Egypt... And possibly licked his blood or tears... I'm not exactly sure, but it doesn't really change the mood either way...
Very nice one-shot. I'm going to have to explore your profile in search of more...
| firedraygon chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
I love Yami Bakura's mocking tone at the end. I really enjoy reading dialogue-only fics, and this one is done very nicely (in that I wasn't confused as to who was saying what XP). Lovely work~
| angelic aibou chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I loved the writing style for this and the storyline was amazing but I was wondering at the end when it says "your wrists should have scabbed over by now" I was wondering if Ryou had tryed to kill himself by slitting his wrists but maybe I'm reading into it too much anyway great story
| Alca99 chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
strange but good
| D chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wow... that was awesome and very cool... Keep up the good work.
| Paladius chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
I... don't know why this strikes me so much, but it does. /Very/ interesting; the dialogue-style fits well... rather than having detail to support it, the entirety of the story was expressed through mere spoken words... and expressed well.
I usually have a great dislike for anything mixing dub version with other versions, with AUs of Egypt... but I enjoyed this. A lot. The characterization was scarily /apt./ And that's a very good, very rare thing to find.
Especially enjoyed the very end of it. Wonderful, wonderful dialogue.
| adele4 chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
Uh, well, the only idea of Yami Bakura telling a bedtime story’s somehow scaring. I like the way this is written a lot. Confusing at the begin, and gradually scaring... Poor Ryou.
| koriaena chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
its kinda hard to tell whos talkin sometimes...
| Dark Wolf on a full Blood chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Dude!That was evil!But good.